Reviews for Equation
UConnHusky90 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
wow, how could something be so disturbing but sooo hot? finn definitely has issues that need to be factored in to this equation (hah!) because i don't think he got the satisfaction out of his he thought (unless he's been harboring a latent crush on puck for years...)

the characters were spot on perfect and i always had in my head canon that puck was a little flexible. nice one!
MoonlightatDusk chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
GReat! But how does the title relate to the story? Please inform me! Anyway, awesome fic! So angsty and dark...Shudders
LovingSladeAlways chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Damn. This was insanely good. More than good; FUCKING CRAZY ASS SEXY DARKNESS! It was so *shuddering breath* hot, and so *another breath* sexy, that I could hardly breathe the entire time I was reading! And man, that was a Finn I have never seen, but I loved! And Puck, w-o-w. You did fantastic writing from his kinda-ish point of view. It was so realistic and like Puck that it truly could've been him. He is a whore, and he knows it. And the end was so telling to that. Poor Finn. At the end Finn said he thought Quinn would always be the one to break his heart-that line-washe saying that Puck actually broke his heart instead?

GREAT JOB! LOVED IT!
Mneo chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I absolutely loved this. I really felt for Puck but Finn as well. You managed to get their feelings across quite well even if not much insight was given to what Finn was thinking. His actions pretty much explained what he was feeling.

It was just great.

There are a few spelling errors, not many though and it didn't take away from the story at all. Anyways, I'm glad I stumbled upon this fic, great read.
XXXMystery chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Talk about cum money(play on blood money). lol Finn has some issues to work thru and Puck sure as heck didn't help. I love this. It's definitely one of my fave fuck (puckfinn) fics yet!
Cappington chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
This was such a good fic, shame that it's complete, i like angsty finnpuck sex.. tis something new and i'm surprised how much i enjoyed it. Great job -thumbs up-
ray4ruffles chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
god- this is such a heavy story; you really took on a lot of angles. and you really pulled it off- the dark writing is just amazing. unbelievable writing; good job