|Reviews for Naru Uzumaki Rise of The Legend|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/7
when are you going to updated chapter 5 ?
| Chris Durham chapter 4 . 1/18
| Naru-fan3400 chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Shika and please update
| Dracoessa chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
Proballe is ebisu-baka.
| Dracoessa chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Good start, but I'm feeling that the crapper is going to hit the fan in the school room.
| Akuma's Raze chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
Please update soon!
| MaKayla McKinze chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
| MaKayla McKinze chapter 4 . 2/20/2013
I do believe a better name for this chappie would be "Challenge Accepted".
| rain chapter 4 . 1/10/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
| Vaughnie16 chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
Shikamaru and haku
| Tempest NightMoon chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Poor ickle gennin, Kakashi's always leaving them waiting, lol! Oh and I vote for Shikamaru, love a lazy genius!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Pair naru with shikamaru
| NamikazeMia chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
will you continue? please
| Caramel27 chapter 4 . 5/30/2012
Hmm, I do like your story However, I do think the quotation marks can be improved..I can understand the story, but it can be better.
For example Path of life, Naru and Sakura said simultaneously, and then looked at each other.
Here, wouldn't it be better if it was "Path of life," Naru and Sakura said simultaneously, and then looked at each other.
Also, this part Maa, maa, he said, waving a hand idily. Let's go, we don't want to waste day light! He then walked off ahead, as he hadn't been the one who had held them all up.
I think it could be written as this"Maa, maa," he said, waving a hand idily. "Let's go, we don't want to waste day light!" he then walked off ahead, as he hadn't been the one who had held them all up.
I admit I'm not the expert when it comes to grammar but the quotation marks do need some working. It'll be easier for the readers to understand it then.
Thank you for the story. I will be looking forward for your next chapter