Reviews for It started in Italy
YoloBaby chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
Good story!
AUniqueGirl chapter 2 . 2/5/2012
Luv the story. I am doing this from memory, so i don't think there was any significant grammar mistakes. Keep on writing

Wish u gud luk with the story
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
Very interesting job on the story so far, I hope you will be adding more soon.

-What book for "39 Clues" does this take place during?
Cristique chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
It had good paragraphing at the start-variations:long, short, and in-between-but closer toward the end of the chapter, it had only one-line paragraphs. I can only assume that you got tired and rushed.

This is a relatively useless critique.
Luciancahill chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I don't like how they tried why didn't they just go help Amy and Dan?
The Lovely Zombie chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Is there more? And why would the dart have titanium on it?
Queen Alexandera's Birdwing chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
This was just as good as the first chapter, even if there are grammar mistakes. I like how you make Bella incredulous about the Kabras and the Cahills being involved in so deadly a hunt. Edward's kinda bossy, but he always is. Update!

~/-\lexandera
Queen Alexandera's Birdwing chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Very well writen. Of course, there were some grammar mistakes and mixed up tenses-PM me if you want to know the specifics-but other than that, everything was great: the characters are IC (sadly so-WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN WORSHIPFUL OF EDWARD, BELLA SWAN?) and the idea is very original. I really like this story, even though I personaly think Twilight is a bad book, and I think it can go somewhere, AKA Awesomeness Town. Please update!

~/-\lexandera
sarlovesoccer chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Update soon please!
zelgirl chapter 2 . 12/12/2010
hope ya can continue! i reaaly like 39 clues. so try to continue!'kay?
flowerspot chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
that wuz real good

write more

:)
Mrs. Cullen chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
Again:

Update! For my husband, Edward!
Mrs. Cullen chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Update! For my husband, Edward!
Tori-Chan-Madrigal chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
Please God make RandomlyRedRider update the story!

it's spent half a month and you don't update!

Plz I am going to kill somebody if you don't update

Kisses

***Tori-Chan-Madrigal***
Tori-Chan-Madrigal chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
Gosh you have just a few reviews ! Your story is sooooooo good I love it!

I know that you said that you are busy but I love your story you have to update!

see ya latter

~~~Tori-Chan-Madrigal~~~
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