I like your story. I think it's really interesting, detailed, and while you might not be in the field yourself or know a lot about anatomy, with the small facts it seems like you know enough.

I liked how Ichigo and Grimmjow met. It's realistic and interesting.

I don't like the idea of Ichigo being a murderous person, and when I read those murdereous intentions with such details, it makes me a little queasy. But, I'm not saying that it's a bad thing. It's a good thing that you can make me feel this way. It means that you are doing your job as a writer. The reason I keep reading is because of the interesting read, the details, and how you make the murder!Ichigo fit and how everything seems realistic.

I can't wait for the next update.

Isamu

This chapter was pretty cool. I liked how you showed what Grimmjow saw. The...what should I call it? euphoria of finding another like himself was well explained. I can't wait for more.

Truly interesting :) I love the detective Ichigo hahahaha Go on with the fic, please.

I am finding myself sucked into this story and sad when I get through a chapter in nothing flat. XD Mores? 8D

You made perfect sense! Don't worry, it's all fantastic~! I also think it's wonderful how they met and the feelings surrounding those two. I almost feel like Grimm would become a type of "teacher" to Ichigo. God, that would be awesome, Grimm teaching Ichi how to dive into that crazy mind of his and let loose his urges. *shudder* Oh yeah. That'd be REAL nice. ;d More please~!

This is getting gooooooood 3

OH GEEZ. THE PLOT THICKENS. DUN DUN DUNNN!

:O ITS ONLY THE SECOND CHAPTER? I thought there were at least 3 or 4! You've put so much information in these two chapters, i fill I know the whole story by now!... cept i dont.. which sucks. D: Cause i wanna know what happeeeeens. *throws tantrum*

*ahem* This is getting too good. I wonder how Ichi will go about his "private investigation" business. :3 AH! HURRY AND UPDATE, WOMAN. _

love it.. its kind of funny you say about realism cause even CSI be having some unreal-ism going on but stuff like that really happens. Mayuri was just as creepy as ever *shivers* and Ooo a hint of inside Ichigo's crazy mind *throws hands in the air*. I love how Ichi and Grimmjow met, it was perfect especially since Ichigo is suppose to be a really amazing detective to see Grimmjow in the crowd was thumbs up. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Actually, I love it! I also like Grimmjow being as perceptive as he is in Bleach, so that is great and that he wants to 'test him out', like some sort of toy sounds amazing to me.

Somehow, I can understand Ichigo's urges of killing someone but somehow I can't, if you know what i mean;) It's like thinking back of Bleach, he would never kill someone (except for Ulquiorra:'() and it's not his character to kill, well Shiro but yeah...so I wonder what you've planned out:D

Can't wait for more murder happy Grimmjow!

update soon!

~ Riekie

YAY! *screams approval* I LOVE! Thank You for updating, it's excellent and i'm already rereading XD

I love Grimm in this story, I thought their meeting was great!

I love it. We all know Grimm could be an awesome serial killer. :D Also, Ichi as the rash detective with psycho killer tendencies is perfect! I really look forward to where this story goes~! More please~!

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 8D

Actually, I watch crime shows (NCIS, CSI: NY, JAG, BONES) and have read a few crime based books. This is really fun to read. PLease though - *chaneling Ducky* - the laytex gloaves are something that you have to remember...without those, evidence is contaminated...

the stary is great. i don't find the info boring, and grimmjow really does suit the part. . its a new situation that noone else does (having them be police officers). please make a chap 2! XP