This story was brilliant! The ending was fantastic; I've read some of the other reviews, some requesting sequels and others left content. I've sided with those satisfied with the ending, however if you intend to write a sequel I'd definitely be interested in reading it.

I loved how you mixed as much of Bleach's fiction as possible into this story - the winner for me was when you used a phrase Grimmjow's actually used in both the manga and anime (left me fangirling, to be completely honest).

Coming from someone who reads all, if not most, romance-based fanfictions, I was actually glad this didn't turn out into some mushy story or even the fact it didn't have a 'lemon'.

This twisted story has definitely gained a follower of your work and a fan. Kudos to you.

FAN GIRL SQUEAL.

You used Grimm's catch phrase :3 I was like OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
and reading your author notes, I'd like to reassure you that your writing is brilliant.

Claiming that the quality went down is absolute bull. The fact I've been reading this fanfiction for hours straight PROVES what an excellent writer you are - I love multi-chaptered FF but I tend to lose interest and finish them at a later date.

Damn. I'm actually happy with the ending. Wasn't expecting to be, but I understand it, and it's thrilling for my imagination. Rule number one: never get bored. -TPP

Thanks for finishin it! But the ending really makes me curious, how the hunt going?

Oh I cant wait for the hunt to begin and see if Ichi finally gives in or not.

Eh?! What an open ended...well, ending! Totally did not see that coming. Kind of disappointed, but at the same time I like it, compared to if it suddenly shifted to a normal romance or something like that. So many possibilities for a sequel! :) Good job!

Hmmmm.. The ending makes the imagination run wild. Like an endless chase of cat and mouse. I like it *smirks*. Ichi and Grimm totally have a marriage died in darkness, no other words to describe their relationship. Anyway, thank you for finishing the story up *grins* I love how you wrote this story and hope that you would write more... underground or crime type stories.

Wow, that's an interesting ending! Hopefully you might make a sequel to it, but we won't know until the next time! Bye-nii...!

What an afwul and crapy ending. I hated it. You wrote a complete master piece and completely ruined with this. And to think I considered you a great author. Obviously you didn't have the enthusiasm to put a little more effort in this. You totally, absolutely and completely dissapointed all the readers that follow you. And you say "I apologize to anyone who is disappointed in this ending" You knew that this was a dissapointed ending since the beginning didn't you? And of course we hate this story. We waited a lot of time to read the end just to find out this shit. Awful if your other stories are going to be like this please go to another fandom and don't ruin this one.

I am a bit disappointed, I mean I figured it might end with one of them killing the other or like double KO, or you'd show that they ran off together or something. But then maybe that might have been a little over kill (HA!). Sometimes stories go on too long and there isn't a clear ending point, so maybe it's good to cut it off before it becomes too much. I was just so in love with this that I kinda wanted a little more closure. But I do like that you get the gist, they'll keep hunting each other. I want to say that my version of the far ending would be them getting together, but then I think that's too controlled of an ending. So then I would go with Ichigo killing him or locking him up and visiting him frequently, or maybe Ichigo going crazy after killing him and then his friends have to try to take him down...

I'll stop lol. I like your ending now that I think of all the possible outcomes. This was one of my ALL TIME FAVORITE stories. SO much psychological stuff was going on, it's my favorite kind of story and what I look for in scary movies. :) thanks for sharing your brilliance!

That was a good ending! I lliked it! I feel kinda sad that its over now though. End of story blues.

WAIT... Is this the last chapter?! is it?! How could Ichi deny his other half! Argh! You know what they say, be true to yourself, follow your dam instinct *frowns*. There's no such thing as 'normal' in Ichigo's life *smirks*.. He's just escaping reality.. again. Ahh it would be so cool if this is like Dexter! A cop and a part time killer It would totally make Ichi sane and not just grab anyone on the street and just start killing.. like a rapist i guess *sneers*... Desire desire *grins* I look forward to the next chapter...

Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to ploughing through the next 15 chapters. :)

I read this story in ONE DAY! And I love it! I can't wait to see when it concludes! Write free!

This was a great read, I really liked it so much, I couldn't stop reading in order to sleep lol and ill be waiting patiently for the next update.