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That was.. the most amazing thing i've ever read. The detail was impeccable, the characters were so IN character and it left me hanging on the edge of my seat the whole time i was reading. It was by far the best read EVER.

Really, the first chapter was amazing and I hope to see more of this fic soon.

Thanks for coming up with and putting up such an amazing story!

Pretty cool. I like it. Well-researched, and yes, Grimmjow actually does fit the bill of a serial killer. I'm expecting that there's no yaoi in this, since it would be a bit hard to get it believable. I'll be interested to see how this goes. Good luck with balancing three stories! :S

You're way ahead of yourself Kaz. I love this though! Impulse written stuff always turns out good in the end. I'm sure this story will develop amazingly just like your other stories. I wonder what's going to happen! X'D

Please update soon

Oooh I'm liking this, especially the unexpected lil' twist of the-devil-in-me Hichi ;P Interesting.

Oh, and nah, all the info ain't borin' (especially adding some canon 'facts' into this was a nice concept XD Such as Grimmjow's hollow hole and seis) -in fact my brain's mentally imagining up a CSI version of Bleach *lol* XD I love watching 'em, but alas, since about over a year or so ago they went on cable only *disappointed sigh*

Yay for sadistic psycho Grimmjow! Though I don't mind all those 'watered down' depictions of him in most fics, but really, I mean for once SOMEONE depicts that side of him dead on *applauds to you*

Yay you've started it

Is there something wrong with me if I think a Grimmjow as a murderer (...with a little of detective Ichi ) is fucking HAWT?

Anyway, love it so far and it seems like this is going to be an awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter :D ( Pliz let it come out before the 18th I wanna read it before I'm separated from this wonderful world called the internet)

Really good story please write more soon

it's to good to stop:)!

SO INTENSE.

Looks like it's going to be another great read! :D

inanimaterabbit from LJ:

I'm so mad I read this story, because there isn't more. Fix it soooon... I'm already itching to see the kind of interaction Grimmjow and Ichigo could have. With the former's fascinations and the latter's dark tendencies, I look forward to something wonderfully dangerous.

Many Grimm/Ichi stories I read are either very badly written, or somewhat well written with a concept I don't find wholly interesting and read because something is better than nothing. I don't want to be too grandiose because this is only the first chapter, but I don't think you're in either of those categories.

Intresting, very interesting... more please ;)

Sounds just like any forensic/crime drama show! I like, good job!

I really like this story I'm a huge fan of Criminal Minds so seeing it influence a Bleach story makes me very excited. Like you I defiantly see Grimmjow fitting the kind of serial killer profile. The story is very interesting and the set up is very nice. I can't wait for more.

Please update this soon, it's really interesting.

I fell in love with the idea when you unveiled it earlier, but i'm obsessed with this story now

i usually read books with murder but now that you've mixed my favorite pairing to the genre... i cant express how much i look forward to this!

hope u'll update soon. really awesome

Kyaa such an awesome fic already!

I LOVE it that you made Grimmjow the serious bad guy here, all he did sounds extremely like him (he's the one that likes punching people in the gut, so yeah, perfect!).

Keep up with your great work and can't wait to read the rest of this amazing story!

~ Riekie

P.S. Update soon