Reviews for Killer Instinct
mist shadow chapter 16 . 10/6/2012
well, damn, the temptation is still there, it will be there as long as he lives. and having a lover might actually be worse, as it will give a secondary target to those who want to harm
live is like a set of theater stands during a festival, we can only glimpse a scene here and there while walking down the road, without actually knowing the whole story played out
so is the story finished? seems like a logical place to stop, without dragging it out
RheizeL chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
OMG! you're a Filipino?
Wow! You're English is just awesome I thought you're a foreigner...

I hope I could write like that too..
My Skills sucks..
But anyway, I'm so happy to learn that a fellow Filipino could write like this!
Amazing!

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kai-kakashi chapter 16 . 9/16/2012
:O this would have been the last chapter?! I'm glad you decided to continue it a little bit longer. Things are starting to get more interesting and set off :)
Reader chapter 16 . 9/11/2012
Thank you for not abandoning the best Bleach fanfiction in the internet. X)
phantomcat chapter 16 . 9/5/2012
Yeah, update! I'm really happy that you're still writing this, I really love this story. I'm so invested in it now, I can't wait to see how it ends.
My0wnlittleworld247 chapter 16 . 8/15/2012
Ooh, I really liked it :D particularly Grimmjow's POV, usually authors like to make him fall in love or whatever, but you did a good job of keeping him in character.

I was slightly dissapointed when I realised that this wasn't romance :/ I was after a yaoi smut fic, but hell, for all the non-smut fics I could have chosen, this has to have been a better one... you even managed to throw in some yaoi on the side :)

I'm seriously hoping for another chapter, it just didn't round off to my liking... there's still the "maybe later you'll come to your senses"

The ending line was good, that worked well, though I'll admit that I was hoping Ichigo would join the dark side... anyway, I think there's just too much potnetial for a next time for this story to end here. It's better to tie off the loose ends.

Anyway, that's just my opinion. I really did enjoy this fic, so much so that it's 4 AM here, and I have school in three and a half hours -_-'

Good luck for any future writings!
Wrath4life chapter 16 . 8/6/2012
So, one more chapter huh? For second, I thought Ichigo would end up as a predator like Grimmjow. Unless, Inoue will be the trigger to make Ichigo want to kill her or Grimmjow would want to kill her for being with his prey lol.

Pretty much your story reminded me of this other GrimmIchi story where they are both killers/lovers it's called, "Hoshoku" by Mistress Penelopye.

Both of your gore stories are pretty good but was really hoping Ichigo would've ended up with Grimmjow let's see how you'll pulled this off for the finally chapter if your still continuing it that is...
Love Psycho chapter 16 . 8/4/2012
Oh wow. What an interesting story. I'm curious about what will happen next. Ichigo will probably snap though - one way or the other.

-hands over platter- Magic cupcakes for you!
Dysfunctional Serenity chapter 16 . 8/3/2012
I really liked this fan fiction, thank you SO much for writing it! I know it's not entirely finished yet but still, this is by far, the best thing I've ever read! I have no idea how you're planning on finishing this but I would like to see him going with Grimmjow though his REALLY choosing a normal life would make sense... hm... anyway, do what you will. Take your time to make it great!
Suki
Sorrow The Brave chapter 16 . 7/31/2012
so insane! I love it! I'm really curious what comes next! I like these kind of storys where their relationship develops on a long way.
Maybe2Morrow chapter 16 . 7/30/2012
thanks for updating! and WOW, amazing chapter even though you disagree. and it almost seemed like Grimmjow wanted Ichigo to be with him? even though he decided now to not give into it, I have a feeling it won't be just that easy. I can't wait for the next update! even if it does take like half a year!
Through Darkness and Light chapter 16 . 7/30/2012
Oh dear D8 that is quite tough. Well, even though it took a long time I have to say that I'm VERY happy that you managed to update again. I really, really love this fanfiction and even though I might have to wait a long time until the clear end of it; it's so worth it.
Plus. Your Grimmjow is sexy badass.
Discreetly Gleeful chapter 16 . 7/29/2012
Aw boo! It ends!
Misc. Ink chapter 16 . 7/27/2012
Well, first off, I am happy to see more of this story, and the wait was worth it. I honestly was not expecting most of what happened in this chapter, and didn't expect to see Grimmjow again so soon. However, now that I know this story is almost over, it seems like a good way to start wrapping it up. I'm honestly a bit sad this won't be longer, but I have no idea where I would want the story to go after this. There are so many things that feel unanswered, and Ichigo doesn't seem content at all. But some stories are just like that, and actually better that way.

And now that I feel like I'm rambling, I will wrap this up. On a final note, I'd just like to say I do love this story, and am looking forward to its conclusion (regardless of when you post it).
PanteraFang chapter 16 . 7/27/2012
Damn! This story was updated! To be honest i almost forgot bout this story, but when i saw it was updated i remembered and almost freaked X3
Grimm is back! And there was an absolutely hot kiss between the two.
Damn cant wait for the next update!
Till then!
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