Reviews for Proving a point
Hammilton chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
Just wanted to say that the last Anonymous review was my own. I really think you shoulc consider writing more!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
This is cute and true to charecter, but it ends kind of sadly. To make it well rounded, I think you might write in the part where they get to Narnia, and maybe have Peter apologize to Lucy for what he'd done. You know, it was a bit of an injustice. But otherwise, well written. You should write more about narnia. There aren't very many
littlemsEMOtional chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
Even though it was short it had a good concept with cute peter and lucy moments
5SecsOfLARRYcat chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Artemis zodiac chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Nice chapter. Good ending. You should write more about Narnia. You could perhaps do one of lucy being punished during her teenage years (while they were kings and queens
DemiSaler chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
Good job seeing how you told me you were havin a hard time on this chap. Good story all in all. Oh um you know who (I'm pretty sure you do) hasn't messages me back so...ya. But I'll send you it late when they do. Kay? Luv ya! God Bless! Xoxoxox :*

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wandamarie chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
it was a good one i had to spanked my brother and sister when i was left in charge it broke my heart like it did to peter but that is what the oldest has to do i even had to spanked my cousins when i was left in charge thanks keep up the great job
Artemis zodiac chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Please update. have waited so so so so so so long for somebody to write a story of lucy being spanked
Elleniel chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
lol awesome! update!
pselJacobs chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
wow! very good! please update i need to know what happens!
Sushihiro chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
This is awesome! I. NEED. MORE!
DemiSaler chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
You are good babe! Like ROCKIN! lol. This is EXACTLY how I pictured it. Thank you so muc! Luv ya! UPDATE SOON! GOD BLESS! xoxoxox :*

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LolaWorld chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Hi :)

I am really enjoying this so far. Please continue

asap. :)
wandamarie chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
wow it was a good one thanks hope you up date when you can thanks
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