Reviews for Cold Reception
CallMeButLove chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
First - I am sorry not to have done this sooner! I've been well, distracted...very distracted.

Second - This chapter, like the others is just fantastic! I am seriously loving the dynamic between Nigel and Wally. The 'rock-paper-scissors' bit had me in stitches!

Third - I really liked Chad's entrance at the end. Such high drama, and exactly the right dose of bitterness. All in all, just a really phenomenal piece of work, keep it up!
madier1095 chapter 5 . 7/24/2010
Yay! Next chapter please! :D I'm glad Numbuh One is staying for a little longer!
MusicPeaceAndCheese chapter 5 . 7/24/2010
YAY! :D haha I almost fan girl screamed when I noticed this chapter was up, but we have company over xD Still, it was amazing. I seriously thought the end part was Hoagie though, and I was positive when it talked about the girl he liked not caring about him. I thought he was talking about Numbuh 5 xD

I guess I'm a bit clueless though :P haha

MusicPeaceAndCheese chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Sad chapter! Poor Wally has been through a lot. Now it seems like it's just him and Kuki left.. :( UPDATE ASAP!
madier1095 chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
Wow. I'm excited about this story. Please keep going. I hate it when people do that, but I must confess I too have done the same thing. Oh well... Anyways, Awesome story! ;)
Iamapotato chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
I LOVE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! But what happened to chapter 4? I LOVE THIS!AHH!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Seriously I am checking like every hour. UPDATE!
MusicPeaceAndCheese chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
Where did Chapter Four go? D:

Just began reading this, it's amazing so far! I need to read more! :D Update ASAP and bring back chapter 4! xD
MiravsStella chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
My guess? If it's someone Numbuh One doesn't expect... I'd say the Traitor's Rachel.
pandaisthename chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
Oh MY! i honestly love this story so far :] Good luck writing the rest.
asd'viers.dfga chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
This chapter made me happy. :]

We finally get to meet Wally! I really like the interaction between Wally and Nigel, and look forward to finding out more about what happened while Nigel was away. Keep up the good writing!
Azmarsonic chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
And to think Wally wasnt cool enough!

MAN! I'm totally loving this story! its too damn suspenful though! grr i wanna know what happens next and what happened to the others! xP

Anyway, please update soon, i can't wait!
Rachpop chapter 4 . 7/18/2010
Go Joey! You freaked out the bald Brit! *Joey takes off his diaper and starts dancing* ugh Joey, only do that when Wallys around okay…

Wow, wally's mom is really oblivious… and I mean she couldn't even remember the bald kid her eldest son used to hang out with…


update soon :)
QueenoftheWitches chapter 4 . 7/18/2010
amazing, please continue! i can't wait til chapter 5!
x-WritingParadox-x chapter 4 . 7/18/2010
I am so anxious for the next is super amazing, 't wait to see what type of "accident" Numbuh Two was really is too good.
CallMeButLove chapter 4 . 7/18/2010
WOW! You really are trying to torture me aren't you? I am so hooked on this story it's frightening! The drama of it all, and the mystery... Oh and I truly love the way you write Nigel! He is so perfectly Nigel, and I love it. I'm glad he is starting to think now... It's about time. Poor Wally! He has been lonely, but now I am more worried about Hoagie. What happened to him? I can't wait to read more about all of them. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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