Reviews for Jealousy's Kiss
Tifa Amy Lockheart chapter 1 . 7/6/2010

Awwwh Sephy

Heh, so Genesis!
AlexJ69 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
First of all, let me say thank you for writing this for me. It was so very cute and sweet. I had a goofy grin on my face the whole time.

The whole jealousy part was too cute. And I adored that Gen said he and Geal considered Seph as one of them already.

I have to be honest, the whole heart beating fast and belly flip-flops melts me every time.

And I LOVED how Gen just looking at Seph distracts him, that was so great.

I loved this little piece. Thank you again

SHA260 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
That was really good, I like how you explored their emotions, particularly the deeper ones in such a comparatively short snapshot of their lives. I think you really are noticeably improving, which says a lot as you were so amazing to start with! Great fic.