Reviews for Have a Nice Day!
teegzy12 chapter 15 . 2/2
oh no Toms going to find out she had a conversation with Cynous . when he sees those tapes.
teegzy12 chapter 12 . 2/2
bad I dead Hermione she's going to get attached to him. He's really not good for her lol
teegzy12 chapter 1 . 2/1
Huff in puff lol
whitebleachedjeans chapter 19 . 1/24
omg... this ending I LOVE IT. "they climbed into the sky" THATS PERFECT especially bc i see it alluding to how tom and hermione's brains were always above everyone else's-like they're intellectual and intelligence. and now, at the end, they're matched. and the whole flying car thing i love how u incorporated a bit of the canon magical universe (esp when hermione says "it's like magic"). speechwriter you'll forever be one of my favorite ffn writers (this fic, tied for last, dodm are some of my absolute favorites) and im so grateful im able to read this masterpiece. i read this for the first time around dec 2020/jan 2021 (while i was in a very intense tom riddle phase lolz) and i have to say i completely forgot abt it and now i dont regret rereading it ONE BIT (ofc the the social network quote contributed to this def lol). this story literally had my heart RACING and had me at the edge of my seat during EVERY CHAPTER i swear it literally shaved off a few years of my lifespan LMFAO. with hermione going behind tom's back? OMFG girl i was so scared for u. like fr a lot of the time id be too scared to scroll to read what happens next LMFAO i always thought tom would catch her and literally kill her or smthg. when he eventually did confront her THAT WAS SCARY AF. but also when she woke up after the fire and said "who r u" to tom i GASPED BRUH. but then i remmeber (from my first read) that she faked it lol soooo surprise surprise. but that was srsly a good plot twist. also cygnus has my heart. and also the fact that tom and hermione AND EVERYONE IN THIS FIC are 17 yrs old wtf bruh im literally 16 and they're so accomplished tf (not to mention tom literally earning 8 million an hr or smthg bruh). but anywaysss why abt i talk abt the writing and adaptation of the story and plot? cus they are PHENOMENAL. the way u wrote tom and hermione falling in love felt so real and authentic and well-paced and well-developed it's insane? like u KNOW a story's good if a lot of the writing reflects characters' own personal thoughts and not just the evnts of the story yk. and u did just that and managed to capture both hermione's studious/pedantic and morally upright personality and tom's lowkey psychopathic (sorta ig lol)/superior/pragmatic personality and managed to make both work and twist both perspectives slowly into falling in love. ugh idk if this is just me but i swear the media's portrayal of falling in love has gotten to me bad. like i read a lot and everytime the characters fall in love and it states that im always so idk like doubtful/unbelieving bc idk for me i expect ppl to fall in love only after theyve gone thru smthg like super hard/mindblowing together? like in this story tom and hermione begin to fall in love during school when all this business stuff is happening and all they do is hang out and talk (well obv more deep but u get the gist) which was SUCH A GOOD WAY TO DEVELOP THE FALLING IN LOVE THING but ugh this personal thing of mine idk at some parts i'd just think that this was unrealstic? like i always expect for the 2 ppl in love to go thru a whole mf spiritual journey or smthg and then fall in love. idfk i hate the media for making me believe that love springs from some dramatic catalyst or smthg when im sure u can def fall in love w someone by just spending time w them a lot and getting to know them (like tom and hermione ig) but also im just 16 lol so. anyways that was a whole rant abt me lol um. anyways LAST THING I WANTED TO TALK ABT was ur portrayal of tom's addiction to damaging substances (cigs, drugs, etc.). i know for a fact that the first time i finished this fic i didnt rly care for that aspect of the story BUT NOW holyyy that's deep and im so glad u included smthg like this in the story. it rly does show (as cliche as it sounds) that nobody's perfect, even tom (aside from being a whole murderer lolz but yk). especially at the end when he just gives up that part was so significant to me? bc his character had always seemed so strong and upright and the humanity of him breaking and just giving up is so profound. and the fact that his motivation to continue and leave this slump is hermione? how romanticcc. so yea i think i'll leave it at this cus this review is long lol but speechwriter if u ever read this just know u have a loyal fan out there! i love your work (omg maybe you've seen the longass review i left on dodm too) and i hope u continue writing :) (also leaving this review on chap 19 cus it wont let me leave another on chap 20 bruh cus of the prada fangirling one i alr left)
whitebleachedjeans chapter 20 . 1/24
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP IM NOT EVEN DONE W THIS CHAPTER BUT I HAD TO SCROLL DOWN AND LEAVE THIS REVIEW ASAP WHEN I SAW THE MY PRADA'S AT THE CLEANERS LINE HOLY SHIT I DONT REMMEBER THIS LINE BEING IN THIS FIC OMFG I SUDDENLY LOVE THIS FIC 200X MORE I LOVE ANDREW GARFIELD THIS IS FRICKING AMAZING SPEECHWRITER THE INCORPORATION OF THIS LINE IS ABSOLUTELY GENIUS LIKE MIXING THE TWO THINGS I LOVE THE MOST-HARRY POTTER AND MARVEL. ok bye lolz
whitebleachedjeans chapter 12 . 1/18
my favorite chapter by far. this ending was beautiful. goshhhhh whats gonna happen? tommy boy has fallen in love LOL
Guest chapter 20 . 12/21/2021
Excellent story with great characterization. One of the best representations of Hermione I've ever read.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/27/2021
Great story! It has its ups and downs, but it's definitely enough to keep me interested. One thing that seemed very out of character to me was for Tom to keep his haven account numbers... in a document called without even encrypting it. I mean, he could simply do something like store the numbers but add 5 to every single digit so they aren't easily decipherable. I do understand that this is most likely a plot device though.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/21/2021
Great Story! My only real complaint was that Tom seemed to be rasher and more foolish near the end and Hermione became way more manipulative and clever than she was shown to be at the start. However, you certainly had excellent worldbuilding, an engaging plot, and a satisfactory ending. I really enjoyed this work.
accurseddivinity chapter 20 . 4/18/2021
I cannot tell you how much I adore this. All your Tomione ff are amazing and I love them all. The parallels between the AU and the OU made me scream and the plot is exquisite! Awesome
accurseddivinity chapter 12 . 4/18/2021
I think this was my favourite chapter.
The irresistible force had met its immovable object. Is probably going to stay in my mind for months and the fact that Regulus was the name of the star that led to his downfall? I gasped.
Jennieb89 chapter 20 . 2/15/2021
I loveeeeeed every single second of this!
Jennieb89 chapter 19 . 2/15/2021
Ahh, i loved it! so shocked that she was pretending did not see that coming.
Jennieb89 chapter 18 . 2/15/2021
HOLY SHIT! WHATTTTT?!
Jennieb89 chapter 11 . 2/14/2021
Hey, been reading this for a feq days. just wanted to say i love it! Its getting so good!
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