Reviews for Have a Nice Day!
catsilhouette chapter 20 . 2/27
seriously? this is just simply clever. the language, the topic, everything. i love both characters, their witty arguments, their personality, and how they are just perfect for each other. i dont even give a shit about school when i read this. and the plot is cool. when i read about Hermione got amnesia i was a bit dissapointed. but then i figured out that she was just fake it and i was relieved for that. she got that idea so fast even though she was facing a big trouble. awesome, that hermione. i read you other tomione story 'tied for last' too long time ago, and i dont have any idea you are the one who wrote that. you r cool. keep it up!
Vercingetorix1234 chapter 16 . 2/24
Actually, disregard my previous review. Upon thinking about it some more, I don't think it was Hermione getting lucky that really bothered me, though it is a minor gripe. That occurred in canon too, after all, especially in the first two books where the trio constantly stumble across clues at random. I still have a hard time placing it, but I think it might have been Hermione's character. She came across as a bit hypocritical and cruel for trying to ruin VoldeMart by manipulating Tom into falling in love with her so that she can betray him. Obviously, Tom was much more evil, but since Hermione acts so self-righteous it's really grating coming from her. It doesn't make sense logically since obviously ruining VoldeMart is good for many people whereas hurting Tom only hurts one person. It also seemed a little vindictive of her to also go after Tom's offshore accounts, the only money he would have left in the world. That didn't seem necessary to ruin VoldeMart. Normally I wouldn't bother to write a review for a story that I disliked, but this one is so well-written and well-plotted that I'm surprised that I disliked it and wanted to consider that more. Well, whatever, you can't please everyone.
Vercingetorix1234 chapter 15 . 2/24
This story is really well-written but I don't really like this depiction of Hermione. Riddle succeeds through hard work and determination. Meanwhile, Hermione just gets lucky. Myrtle just happens to leave a written account of Tom's actions on the bathroom wall. Hermione just happens to get the package full of papers. Hermione just happens to hear Tom speaking to Abraxas and finds out he's the real CEO. It doesn't seem like she's really as smart as Tom in this story, it just seems like Deus Ex Machina.
SiriuslyPink chapter 9 . 2/12
This is the most manipulative Tom I have ever seen. And I've read most of the good written Tomione fics. Although I'm sure it helps that this is an AU and she had no idea that Tom Riddle was evil from the start.
SiriuslyPink chapter 8 . 2/12
He sure knows how to manipulate.
Countenance chapter 20 . 2/6
Brilliant story! c;
Guest chapter 20 . 1/29
This was wonderful story! I really liked your Tom, he was absolutely perfect - charming, evil and without conscience, but still not yet without any hope. His reformation was done really well and it was believable: despite his newly gained morals his personality didn't change and he still had to deal with his problems, eg. tendency to use violence. So thank you for a marvellous story!
Iceagesurvivor123 chapter 20 . 1/10
I am completely in awe of every gorgeous thing that this story is oh my god you are so perfect and this fic i love you
UniquelyMi chapter 20 . 1/6
You have written one of the few Hermiones and even fewer Tomiones I actually like. I cannot fully convey my appreciation, since the pairing (and the people) is one of my favorites in the...abstract. Wonderful writing and plotcharacter development!
aviddaydreamer chapter 20 . 1/2
Okay, so I actually started reading this a while ago, but I just wasn't really feeling the socioeconomic status/blood status, corporate espionage thing, and my mind wandered. I have to admit, I am so, so glad I came back to finish it! Once the relationship between Tom & Hermione really gets going, this story reaches its full potential for awesomeness. And that is a LOT of awesomeness. Very, very well done. :)
Guest chapter 18 . 12/21/2014
omg i fucking love this story! amazing
leeleepupu chapter 13 . 12/17/2014
Hannah chapter 20 . 12/12/2014
Omg i loved it ahhhh can't believe its over!
Lost in a magic realm chapter 20 . 12/8/2014
I enjoyed reading your story. I must say I liked your Tom version a lot more than your Hermione. I didn't find her to be as good as person, as she thought herself to be. In fact I found Tom to be a much better and more honest person in the last couple of chapters, than Hermione could claim to be. I really like your Tom. I know he has his temper issues, but at least he's willing to face them and work through them and strive to do better, make himself a better person. Tom is willing to give up everything for her. I can't help but wonder, what she have been willing to give up for him?
Anyway... thank you for sharing a well told story.
Sun-diva chapter 20 . 11/13/2014
Hello there! I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this Tomione AU! I don't get to read much well-written and well-plotted HP AUs in general, so this was quite the treat! I very much like your Tom Riddle because I think he was very realistic for the setting and plot. The references to the original story were a funny and nice touch. The chapter titles are hilarious. Great story, I loved reading about how Tom and Hermione fell in love with each other!
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