Reviews for Have a Nice Day! |
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![]() ![]() God this is beautiful |
![]() ![]() This was amazing. Really good shit, bravo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was wonderful. I don't usually read Muggle AU stories, but your Tom had me hooked till the last chapter. I read the entire story in 3 hours, and I loved it so much. I loved the way you portrayed Tom, and his character development was amazing. When Lestrange attacked Hermione and Tom saved her, the way you portrayed his thoughts and his immediate reaction to the scene in front of him gave me goosebumps. The good kind. And when Hermione 'lost' her memory? It was so heartbreaking and I felt so bad for Tom, and then, you suddenly revealed that her mind was perfectly intact. Wow! Great job on that! Cygnus Black was one mysterious character, and I'd have loved to read more about him. Your story was brilliant with its details about banking and finance and AI. I really ANDROID the story (Get it? Enjoyed? Android? :D ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your work.u really are a phenomenal keep is a pleasure to read your work. |
![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Love |
![]() ![]() Oh no! |
![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() On the edge of my seat! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god oh my god I’m so SLOW. I knew that dialogue was familiar and I’ve rarely gotten past the first five minutes of the Social Network due to film analysis classes assigning it. And I’ve actually sat through the Social Network without clocking out after 5 minutes or knocking out aND IM JUST NOW UNDERSTANDING THAT REFERENCE AFTER YEARS OH MY GOD Needless to say I love coming back to this story because of how well you develop the relationship between Tom and Hermione and the clever incorporation of pop culture references. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck. This is perfection ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic. One of the few Tomiones I actually believed could happen. The leap Tom has to make from evil and ruthless to love and trust is usually too great. And Hermione’s willingness and ability to overlook all the evil in his soul and the horrible things he has done and can do - it is something I never believe because it is so against grain on who she is. But neither one of them loses who they are here. They actually grow, they don’t just fall in love and remain the same, only with a blind spot to the problem that is the other. Stories can become a bit tired when those blind spots lead again and again to mistaken trust which acts as the engine that provides the ongoing conflict. I mean, there are a number of other Tomiones that I have enjoyed immensely. But this was the most satisfying. Very impressive. I wish I had half the well applied creativity and ability you do speechwriter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really enjoyed that! Thank you so much for writing a really interesting story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol if you added children in the epilogue I would be concerned. Tom is definitely not the fatherly type |
![]() ![]() ![]() He really does genuinely love her. Even with his temper and messed up ideals he cares enough to Write her a poem. That's so sweet! |