Reviews for Games of Torture |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Safa. El capítulo uno fue mejor. La re flashaste cósmica, gil. |
![]() ![]() Stupid stupid stupid... Betcha like Twilight, too huh? Stupid sparkle vampires... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent thanks |
![]() ![]() This was, in all honesty, extremely odd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story! i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know, I rather liked how it began. But I found the sudden turn to vampirism a little abrupt. Though there was that hint from when Bellatrix stabbed her fingers into Hermione's wound. I feel that this plot could have expanded a lot more, but I can understand why you wanted to keep this a two chapter/one shot fic. I found the ending a little...rushed? But nonetheless I still enjoyed this story so thank you very much! There just isn't Hermione/Bellatrix in the world. Sigh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marvelous story, the weird gaps like how Bella forgot to ask her to strip completely puzzled me and the vampire component was a nice touch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting twist. Nice two chapter one-shot; I could have dug some more chapters detailing the events that are mentioned in this one, but it totally works too. Thanks for painting outside the lines :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the detail you put into describing Hermione's dirty outfit to the point of her stockings missing. I like how you described Bella canting her head so that her hair obscures her face so that Hermione can't read her emotions/reactions. I like Bellatrix and Hermione stories a lot! I like your story very much so far and always wish the stories I like would go on for days... I like that when Hermione conceded some of her pride she was rewarded 'some' kindness. I like the transition from blacking out to waking up. I like that Bella isn't over the top reactive to Hermione's outbursts. Now I'd like to continue reading chapter two. Thank a bunch for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was bizarre. Vampire Bella? This is strange :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cringed at the finger in her leg eeeeeeeek. That was gross. The cellar was vivid made me feel sick. But that's what you were aiming for right? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good, I mean, nice attempt but normal smut would have also been ok. I just don't see the attraction of vampirism. |