Reviews for Toyed With
PoNy chapter 3 . 4/6
This story is very interesting and I enjoy reading it a lot! I desperately want to know what happens! Will kid ever be freed? Will Spartoi find him? I must know what happens! Will you please finish the stories? I know its five years later but, its a great Fanfiction! 8! ! :3 well Goodbye! -PoNy
PoNy chapter 1 . 4/6
I liked it. It was good, I don't know what else to say but that it was written well and there was no grammar mistakes that I noticed. Very interesting story :D
Amethystfairy1 chapter 3 . 3/27
I'm gonna review even though you haven't updated in forever and a half. I did skip the explicit part, because thats not my favorite kind of read, but, other than the part I didn't read, this story is really good! I've been looking for a story about Kid getting kidnapped without going crazy and attacking his friends or being sucked into a book. I really want to see what happens so if you have it in you PLEASE give it a shot and post a new chapter, I'd review it the moment I'd read it! Great story your an amazing author!
FrostBite99 chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
You are such an amazing writer! This story is absolutely amazing and I wish and hope with all my heart and soul that you continue.
random person chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Ho Ly sh*t... AGAIN ?! Another good fanfic and people just go and mother fucking abandon it ?! No seriously ! This is a bunch of bull shit ! Ima gonna complain to the forum about abandoned fics ! They shouldn't allow them to be abandoned ! How many orphan fics are there out there ?! A whole fucking lot ! And the numbers are growing ! If you don't have the responsibility nor endurance to finish a fucking fic, then don't begin it ! And just so by the way, I actually liked this, and you just go and abandon it... Is is because of the lack of reviewers ? Because that isn't supposed to deter you from writing ! People don't review 'cause they don't like unfinished fics. Because then they fall in love with it (like certain people *caugh* me *caugh* ) and then what happens next ? ...
NOTHING !
Because you don't continue updating ! You know what it feels like to be abandoned ? NO ! Because I bet you have everything in the world ! All I have is fanfiction ! And even that is being abandoned ! This is a bunch of bull shit !
Thanks to you, my faith in sh*t has goone down even more. END FLAME
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
Escusecme sir but I really, really like this story. The contrast you have with the torture and the way kid is slowly falling into insanity is very well written and displayed. The last chapter was also very well, kids reaction towards the torture, though it was dark. But my main point is please, please continue this story, I'm really curies to see kids mind set and feeling towards just being molested.
death-the-kid is smexy chapter 3 . 1/1/2014
More more more more
Guest chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
Please update soon I'm tired of waiting I've been waiting 1 whole year and 11 months please I beg of you continue!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2013
Is she rapping him (this chapter made me shutter and I think you scared me for life)
LokiLaufeyson222 chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
I really like this! Are you going to continue this?
HuMaN-EaTiNg-PaNdA -HEP chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
hey i noticed that you havent actually updated this in like a year and a half, on the off chance that you are still out there i would be very glad if you finished this. theres really a shortage of good writers on here and you are definitely one of them,
Imbored chapter 3 . 5/9/2013
Sensei are you going to update your story cause it fantastic and epic (O)
crazysnowdragon chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I really hope you will finish this story. Its very good and I would love to read more of it.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
I like how you mentioned soul's desist for "being cool"
Jason chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
Have the next chapter come out soon!
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