Reviews for Neon Genesis Evangelion : Redemption
Flak Head chapter 27 . 8/22/2011
I loved everybit of this fan fiction! The ending was perfect! Screw Evangelion 2.0, they should have made this into the movie!
justbehappydammit chapter 27 . 7/5/2011
This ending was very open-ended, and subject to many possible interpretations. It had plenty of emotional weight and layers. In other words, it felt like a natural fit with the Evangelion series. Well done.
Aincalandorn chapter 27 . 7/3/2011
Well, that was an odd ending. Kind of reminds me of the end of End of Evangelion. It left far to many questions unanswered, and created many. I hope there's going to be another part, but I doubt it.

All in all, great story, kinda sucks that it's over, but all great things come to an end.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 27 . 7/3/2011
arrr, matey! must you continuously mind-reverse-cowgirl the audience? just a few months ago... no, I'm not even gonna reference that ending as dude definitely died there and here (ha, a pun, the chapter title...) he seems to definitely be alive, so... ahem.

*squint* ... aaaaoookay, I'm guessing Miyoko went nuts and bit the bullet or something (aaand in the process somehow helped Asuka save Shinji? Wait, please don't redo this chapter again, I won't be able to review for the finished product as it is). Aaand while Asuka is lacking a guilty conscience (which is good in this situation but bad in bad situations), as it would turn out dude survived anyway, so... just who died? As in, who was the alleged "third sacrifice" over the- ahem.

Right. No spoilers for bastards that like to read the comments before teh chapter. Anyway.

Sweet, and I will be diligent in claiming my congratulations by doing that one thing that people do when something is posted that simply reeks of epicness...

"FIRST, *xx* **xXx*s!"

ahem. anyway.

Thanks for updating (and hopefully ending this one for real although the ominous "Part 1" portion of the title claims otherwise), and keep on truckin. Or if you don't like truckin, then keep on fu-

Aincalandorn chapter 26 . 5/23/2011
Other then the few grammar errors and missing words in this, it's very well done. The errors don't take from the story, before you worry about that.

Can't wait until the next chapter!
Magick Tricks chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Well I started reading this story and it looks pretty good. I'll continue to read it. Also, do you EVER read your PMs anymore? I sent you a couple of them and never heard back from you.
birthofthecool chapter 27 . 4/17/2011
Okay, I'm confused, that last chapter was very much like the original series.

Who was talking to Asuka at the ruins in the end? Did Shinji survive somehow?

Are the others really gone for good? (They must be, but somehow it's... unsatisfying).

Did Myoko survive?

You see, I'm not able to discern between reality and visions in your last chapter, it would be cool if you could clear it up to the idiot that I am.

Aside from that, this chapter felt like a quite abrupt ending.

Did you plan this all along, or did you loose interest and just needed a quick ending for your story?

And if the end is as grim as it seemed to me, was that your intention all along?

I'm not accussing you, I'm just really curious.
Black n White07 chapter 27 . 4/16/2011
Okay I'm really confused now? First its shows a happy end then goes downhill like something off EOE then back to happy and now EOE. Its a good story in general, but so far your ending kind of kills it. Sure now all story don't have a happy ending (thank god for that) but I'm myself not sure what's the ending really here lol
Starfire99 chapter 27 . 4/16/2011
Ok, this last chapter was ridiculously confusing. I have no idea what happened in it, which totally ruins the rest of the story. Half of it is contradictory and makes no sense.
Dark09 chapter 27 . 4/16/2011
Good job on the chapter mate and ending to your fic :-)! A little confusing going to and from different scene's, but other than that pretty cool ;-)!

I would recommend placing a warning at the top for sexual content. I'll be keeping an eye out to future fic's from you ;-)!

Keep up the great work!
birthofthecool chapter 26 . 3/5/2011
And so the rollercoaster ride continues.

Killing off the whole bridge crew in one swoop, my, my!

First Asuka's almost dead, now Shinji is suppossedly dead, akways keeping your readers on the edge. Kudos!
Dark09 chapter 26 . 3/5/2011
Pretty emotional chapter mate :''(. Alot of death in general lol. Hope shinji somehow survived though, if not...well...dam lol. Look forward to the next chapter :-)!

Keep up the great work!
Illogically.Inclined chapter 26 . 3/5/2011
I've been following this since the beginning, and I've been meaning to review it for a very long time, so here goes.

The opening chapters were sloppy: the pacing was haphazard, the text jumped from one scene to another without warning, and the scenes themselves often skipped months at a time between them. But despite these stylistic and narrative flaws, the characterization and the early indications that this was all going somewhere kept me coming back for more, waiting for the payoff, and never regretting it.

And let me say, the payoff has been awesome. The second half of this story, after the pacing settled down and the plot kicked into gear, has been one hell of a kick-ass ride. A weird, dark ride into increasingly unfamiliar territory, but one where I can't wait to see where it'll end up.

I look forward to wherever you're planning on taking us with this story.

Good work, and good luck.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 25 . 2/3/2011
whew, for once this one catches up without jam-ripping the reviewboard. in other news... this seems like it's close to ending (could it be because of the chapter title? could it be because of the 'so, we meet at last' confrontation with 'Miyoko'? could it be because everyone inside the evas are spazzing out? or is it just because I STILL STRONGLY SUSPECT this 'Lloyd' guy to either be Gendo or Kaji? I also get the feeling that you probably won't tell if things turn out that way). one heck of a fic. in other news, all the time-skips and the "Mmm-hummm... what happened in between there?" and various other things that happened... well... eh.

I'm kind of wondering why Ritsuko doesn't seem to be 'back' like almost everyone else. And is everything (scenery-wise) look, like, 'new' in comparison to how it more than likely looked just after third impact?

on THAT note... seriously, why? you have the person who got raped and left for dead turn into Mr. Antagonist's hench-minion, and now have her tortured by the fact that she's been piloting her MOM (who was alive and looking for her at a point maybe 10 or so chapters ago).

Note: The reason I think 'Lloyd' is more than likely Kaji is because for the first part he actually seems that 'decent guy', and the SEELE 14 thing... well, he did work for SEELE at one point. and to my knowledge, there were only 12 monoliths (13 if ya count Gendo) in the series that appeared. Just sayin'.

Toriano.Flacko chapter 20 . 2/3/2011
just one thing: an alternative title for this one would be 'Shinji Regrows his Spine at the Wrong F_cking Moment'. just had to say that, for this one.

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