Reviews for Act
Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Oh gosh so cool! Haha read your profile and think it is so cool you're trying to be an author! Authors should unite together lol anyway I wish you luck! I just love Oz by the way. He has to deal with a life full of messed up and unfair situations so it really is possible that he would want to vanish as Oz so as not to think about the pain of being known as Jack's rencarnation hmm.
Addicted-To-Tic-Tacs chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
It was nice to see a little inside look at Oz's feelings during the time.

I was totally fooled in that chapter!

Anyways... It's some good work
kim-onka chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
That's a nice little story about Oz. I like it how you potrayed him and his attitude. Poor guy.

Minor corrections:

"child that he father" - his father

"got use" - got used

"Oz and Oz and Jack was Jack" - Oz was Oz

"Jack… if you come out then… I'll force you out!" - if you don't come out

"to breath on his neck" - to breathe

...right? I see these are only slip-ups, but... you know ;)

Anyhow, this was definitely interesting to read, well done