Reviews for Hawaiian Vacation
marzmez chapter 16 . 10/27/2010
I like your story a lot! This chapter was good! The dialogue was slightly cheesy, but what do I know. I haven't written any fiction, only read a ton.

Keep up the good work!
CopperFlash chapter 14 . 10/12/2010
Great and interesting story! I like how much thought you've put into the wolve's back stories. It will be interesting to see if this confrontation will come down to a fight or not... And if it's a fight, will everyone really be necessary? Unless it's going to be a huge epic fight (*hint hint*). ;)
Imprinting Magic chapter 13 . 10/4/2010
nice chapter and story.
teambella13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
heyyy this story is so familier!i think i was told about this 1 by grandma!yeppers she sure did!by the way this is gabi not a stalker person haha!but i know this story like the back of my hand!
BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 3 . 8/29/2010
Ah they made it through the flight in one piece. Can't wait to meet Rebecca!
BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 3 . 8/29/2010
Ah they made it through the flight in one piece. Can't wait to meet Rebecca!
BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Seems like everyone wants to go to Hawaii now. Is rebecca gonna phase next chapter?
BLACKWATER4EVR chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Whoa rebeccas in for a surprise. I wonder what rachels reaction is...
TooManyAPsEqualsNoLife chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
This is such an original idea! I love it!