|Reviews for The Iron Rose|
| Sable-eyed-lily chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I've only read the first few paragraphs, but I can't take it anymore. I understand that English isn't your first language, but you REALLY need a good beta. There are just too many words that are chopped up or don't flow right. I know you already have one, but you may want to invest in another one as well. I think it would greatly improve the quality of the story.
| Criosdan chapter 51 . 6/16/2011
It's so cool that you write on. I really like this story.
| ithilel chapter 29 . 12/5/2010
Sweet! Fergus has been found! xD And gave Alistair the talk too. lol
Ah, no Shale? o-o or will she appear in the next chapter? w
Thank you. xD I enjoy this chapter as much as I enjoyed the previous ones. -
| ithilel chapter 28 . 12/5/2010
It's a great story, and I'm so glad to have stumbled upon it. :)
Have you considered getting a beta reader? Some of the sentences or words were not quite right, though because English is not my native language either, I think can still grasp what you meant to say.
It's a very nice story, and I'm looking forward for the new chapters! b Good job and thank you for sharing this story. D
| Wedger chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Some of this reminds me of an epic poem. Thank you for sharing.