Reviews for Victory and Theodore: An Inseparable Pair
ajhalecullen chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
OMG! I think I'm in love with this fic, you have an amazing way of writing :)

You made me cry and laugh alot during all the chapters.

I have to say that this is probably my favorite fic ever!

Wonderful job!
anavihs chapter 31 . 9/9/2010
Holy cripes! She;s just like Molly, popping out babies! wowza! So cute though! "Daddy, Language!"



loved ur story! t'was awesome!

lots of love

anavihs chapter 30 . 9/9/2010
oMG, that thought in the beginning abt which is more painful? OW! crossd my legs for this entire chpt. :)


lots of love

anavihs chapter 22 . 9/9/2010
Love it! it was SO good! n heck yeah with loads of pride! woi! :)

lots of love

Quill-T chapter 31 . 9/1/2010
mmmmm...I'm sad. the story itself is great, wonderful flashbacks and it really does make a nice ending to the series. I'm just sad there isn't more to read but with your skills at writing, there should be. :)

PS: sorry for the amazingly late reviews, got a bit busy settling down at uni but I'm back now (tho too late it seems :( )
Quill-T chapter 30 . 9/1/2010
Wow...I can't describe how good this is but I guess the best thing I can say is that I read this like I was reading a piece in a book by a professional author. It was that good and smooth. seriously you've improved unimaginably and this piece proves you're quite the natural writer.

I should come for lessons, yeh?
Quill-T chapter 29 . 8/31/2010
hey I like this, the quick changes in POV n all actually reflect the sort of rushing and running about n frantic scene along with reminiscing that happens on a wedding day and it really helped to build up a good scene as we see all the different interests in their union. again you're a wonderful descriptive writer and i can picture the scene perfectly in my head. congrats. :)
Quill-T chapter 28 . 8/31/2010
Love it. you kept it nice and suspenseful and you drew a really beautiful romantic scene. quite awesome if i do say so. :)
Quill-T chapter 27 . 8/31/2010
nice introspective piece. I'm not sure exactly which concept you were playing around with here but it's still a good piece imo.
xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 31 . 8/30/2010
Oh! This was amazing! So Sweet:)))

I read all the chapters I head missed due to holidays and I loved them! I couldn't even stoop to review because I wanted so badly to see what happens next!

Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me, although I've been such a terrible reader lately:S

I'm so happy for the way it ended although I'm sasd it did:P

Can't wait to read more of your stories!
DesaraSoleil chapter 31 . 8/29/2010
I don't think I have the vocabulary to tell you how much this moment meant. The warm feeling it gave me, the content smile it left me smiling from beginning to way past the end. It turned out more touching then you'd orignially planned it.

That's the word! Tpuching. THis piece TOUCHED me and I can't possibly imagine a better ending. Your writing was fabulous with such a perfect tone for this last piece. I loved that bit where they looked into the past. I can picture it and it's so... amazing, mate. I get that cheessy, warm fuzzy feeling in my chest simply by thinking about it!

The children. *squee* What gorgeous names! loved them and I can't help imaging them in my head. Zoe sounds quite adorable. _

I don't know what else I can say to tell you how... perfect this last one was. I truly think it's outdone any of the other drabbles in such an amazing way. My words at this moment really aren't enough to express how much I adored this. In fact, I can't help but read it again.

Gorgeous Rosh! I couldn't imagine a better ending my friend. I'm still trying to comprehend that it's over! lolz It's quite Bitter-Sweet! But I'm excited to read what's new from you. With the help of this Challenge, your writing skills have skyrocketed!
allisonarrgent chapter 31 . 8/27/2010
Aw, you did wonderful here, dude! Awesome closing to the story. I felt a lot of nostalgia towards the things that had happened in the previous drabbles, which is something that you planned out perfectly for this one.

Anyways - FIVE kids? They've sure got a full house now, haven't they?

It must have been quite a challenge for you to write these two when they're in their late thirties, but I think you did well. You can really see their maturity through your writing.

I loved James' appearance at the end, haha.

Anyways, great job! I look forward to reading more HP stuff from you soon! :)
allisonarrgent chapter 30 . 8/25/2010
Great job, dude!

There were some comma mistakes here and there, but whatever, it's forgiven. ;)

Anyways, this was pretty perfect in all of the little ways. I loved how the flashbacks tied in to the present timeline, and how you showed both Teddy and Victoire's first person POVs [you and first person are really getting along these days, haha].

I loved the name they chose! It just sounds really fitting. Also, it was so cute that Nate was a Metamorphmagus as well.

So, you've gotten me pretty anticipated for the last drabble. I'm sure you won't disappoint! :)
in sync chapter 28 . 8/25/2010
Awwww, so sweet!

This was a perfect proposal for Vic/Teddy, and I loved this chapter. I liked Teddy's letter to Vic and the first time he saw her.

in sync chapter 27 . 8/25/2010
This was adorable!

I loved seeing Teddy's thoughts- that made me laugh. And even if you think you aren't good at writing first person- you really are!

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