Reviews for The Girl Without Wings
RLFHOG3 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I'll start by saying i am sad that Vanilla was the one that had to die. She's my favorite of the Angels. That being said, I truly liked it. I'm not sure what the Battle station Alpha III is though. (Maybe the Elle Cille?)

One major problem with this is your description of Mint's eyes. They are not blue like you say but are Hazelnut brown. That can easily be fixed though.

All in all, I was entertained.
Paranoid01 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Hey man great story did better then me when I first started