Reviews for That Which Cannot Remain Silent
ncbexie25 chapter 21 . 8/13/2014
This was such a sweet story! I loved all of it - Jasper's determination and words, Edward's neurosis, Bella - everything! Thanks a bunch for writing this!
rachel garber chapter 21 . 2/12/2014
That was a sweet story, I really enjoyed reading it, very well written with a well developed plot, just the right amount of angst to make me nervous that they would ever find their way back to each other, but hopeful that they would see the light in the end. Glad Edward got his groove back with his tea, a beverage that seems more suited to his character, and less nerve jangling to the thought processes to compose music, lol (cause I really hate coffee)
Rachel Garber chapter 20 . 2/11/2014
Geez he made us wait long enough for that, oh boy our boy has gotten all romantical on us, well on Jasper anyway, and Jasper was waiint for that an of course good things come to those who wait, great chapter
rachel garber chapter 19 . 2/11/2014
Well, congratulations baby girl I turst this went well since you did it a few yrs ago and you ar now doing what you wanted to do with your life, great chapter, surprised Daddy C was pkay with Edward's relationship.
rachel garber chapter 18 . 2/11/2014
I felt so sad for Edward what a shame that he had to grow up that way always exhibiting an appearance of perfection to win his father's approval. Very sad for a grown man to have to live with that, but for a boy to grow up always seeking his faethers approval and knowing he could only get it by being "perfect" must have been torture for him
rachel garber chapter 17 . 2/11/2014
This is a shame and this is Edward's fault he expects Jay to read his mind, to know what is bothering him, he was really cruel to Jay. He is so sure that he is unworthy of Jasper's love that he is going to great lengths to prove to himself that Jay should be out of his life very very tragic I hope that Edward realizes what he has thrown away put on his big boy pants and deal with it. Good chapter, though frankly, he is lucky I can't put my hand through this scene otherwise I'd give him a good smack upside his head
rachel garber chapter 16 . 2/11/2014
Emmett is such a baby, what a sore loser, he is so known for being a big baby that his whole family ganged up against him such a jerk. So sweet scene in kitchen glad Jay's family likes him, that is important in any relationship, but most especially for a gay couple when there is hostility from family members. Good job, and little nephews are adorable
rachel garber chapter 15 . 2/11/2014
Go Jasper, go Edward beat Emmett he needs to be brought down a peg or too, very cute ch
rachel garber chapter 14 . 2/11/2014
I hope you got back home safely and had a great holiday great chapter this wasn't too bad wonder wtf Emmett or someone else dod tp upset Edward
Rachel Garber chapter 13 . 2/11/2014
Can I load up my gun and go down to TX and kill Peter, yeah, Edward would not want ot live in a small tonw, not down South anyway hope they always keep the door locked something aobut Emmett tells me he wouldn't be above walking in on them
Rachel garber chapter 12 . 2/11/2014
That was so cute, I wondered what he was going to do to torment Jasper, wow hot too, great chappie, yeah, Jay sort of fucked up on that one, though I could understand his reluctance, Edward is a bit skittish. But he still shpuld have said something. Loved it a lot.
Rachel Garber chapter 11 . 2/11/2014
Poor dear Edward, something he thought earlier in the chapter about his relationship with his father and his father's relationship with his sister came rushing back at me, his father always gave his sister attention, but he seemed to ignore Edward, what wtf is it with fathers who without affection, encouragement from their sons? No wonder he is so insecure, he never had his father on his side, encouraging him, even letting him know he loved Edward. Thankfully he's found that in Jasper. And Edward knows he will always be by his side, rooting for him, encouraging him in everything he does. This was lovely, got a bit confused when he was at the piano and then Jasper pushed him against the wall oh dear, wall sex, well wall seduction anyway. Loved it
Rachel Garber chapter 10 . 2/11/2014
Oh, now you are stalking Rob, well honey let me tell you, he is in LA not Barnes. Good luck with your classes and your job search. Great chapter, glad the boy got the words out, poor Jasper such a nervous wreck, I loved all the scenarios that were floating around that lovely head of his, especiallythe one about Edward's head spinning around ala The Exorcist. Bwahahahaha
rachel garber chapter 9 . 2/11/2014
Their first fight, so cute, and now Edward, you have to say it when he is awake. Um, AJ, I'm not real good at reviews, think of me as the review equivalent of writers who say, "I'm not good at writing summaries" I do love this a lot, and frequently "talk" to the characters in the stories I read. Just kinda can't help myself, they become as real to me as if they are real people.. and I will rip them a new one if I think they need it. No reflection on you per se, cause I think that some stories "write themselves"
Rachel Garber chapter 8 . 2/11/2014
Can't recall what I wrote in last reviews, but oh my, do I love it when my boys blush, especially Edward, his ears, which by the way, are quite cute, just like the rest of him, even turn pink when he blushes, gah, toe curl time. Glad Jay made it clear to Bella that no means no. What a mess she is, kind of presumptuous much. Great that things went so well with Alice and Alec seems to be accepting, and oh, boys will you please stop and listen instead of rambling on without waiting to hear the whole story, word vomit much, lol and piano sex, oh my, Pandora will never be the same. Oh, and by the way, very glad they didn't "go all the way" on their first, well, second date, build up the tension and someone is going to be a tiger in bed. This is a lovely story.
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