|Reviews for There Will Be Blood|
| CafeMoCha chapter 10 . 7/26/2014
Okay, some things are beyond ridiculous here. The most annoying?
Your damn grammatical and spelling errors. I mean "sacredly" instead
of what I'll have to assume was "scared"? A couple or more I can ignore
cheerfully, but on this scale? That's asking a little too much of the average reader. Also, please understand that while you ARE the author, your author notes do merit all-capitals AND bold font. That's just getting on the wrong side of typing etiquette. To point this out seems like nit-picking, but there's a good reason authors don't get stuck on the Caps-Lock key while typing. How would you like a paragraph to be virtually shouted at you? Finally, your story... Sure, it's a lot unrealistic, but it's also quite original in some ways. It also has touches and details that bring your plot to life. I haven't gotten far in this fic and will probably stop reading in another chapter or two because my soul weeps at the glaring mistakes that persist in blocking the flow of the story. You had a good thing going, I suppose, even if I could only get through a few initial chapters.
| robertpatzlover09 chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
omg edwards so naughty, i love it xx
| rclaurel chapter 32 . 7/20/2014
Well two things here...first half could have been avoided if Bella just told Mike that Edward was her boyfriend and she wanted to spend time with him, and not go out just now..the second is that Edward could have explained that he had an accident in the water and was put on strong medication for the pain and he was hallucinating by seeing her and not the beach bunny
| Guest chapter 47 . 7/13/2014
YOU ARE SO FUCKING RIDICULOUS IT'S NOT EVEN FUCKING FUNNY. SHE LOST HER CHILD, THEIR CHILD, WAS IN JAIL FOR 2 FUCKING YEARS, AND HAD TO ALSO MOURN THE LOSS OF EDWARD, NOT JUST HER UNBORN CHILD, AND THEY'RE FUCKING BACK TOGETHER AGAIN? ARE YOU INSANE OR JUST FUCKING STUPID? HONESTLY I'M SO DISAPPOINTED RIGHT NOW IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY, YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER BUT THE UNREALISTIC-NESS OF THIS STORY TOTALLY RUINS THAT.
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/13/2014
cullen men this, cullen men that. this is honestly so fuckin ridiculous its not even funny. they cant be fuckin PERFECT at everything. not to mention, edward cheats on her and SHE had to talk to him b/c hes too PRIDEFUL. and why r u so fuckin sexist? women do more than COOK and SHOP u noe, the girls didnt surf or play hockey...? that just goes to show how perfect cullen MEN are. and despite what u may thin, there are police officers who r women, so include that please
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/12/2014
dictating her life is abuse, he should protect her but this is just ridiculous, maybe he should start by teaching Bella some fighting skills, and honestly its not like Edward ever "checks in" with Bella even if he's gone for days, for asking her to phone every hour symbolizes inequality, and maybe even sexism
| elizabeth bennette chapter 48 . 7/11/2014
This is my fourth times reading this story. Enjoy it everytime. Thanks. Hope you will have time to write more stories.
| CLee56 chapter 43 . 7/8/2014
I kinda wish Edward had let Demetri finish saying what he started to say. Carlisle does say he doesn't think things through.
| CLee56 chapter 42 . 7/8/2014
Ok, pregnancy confirmed. But for Edward no marriage, I guess we'll have to wait and see.
| CLee56 chapter 41 . 7/8/2014
Will Bella really be pregnant?
Why would Aro be entertainig Jacob?
What happened to Seth or does it matter?
This has been one of my favorite fics, you're on my favorites list.
| curiousbeing chapter 11 . 7/6/2014
When is Bella going to tell the truth to Edward? The suspense is killing me! I don't like to think about what could happen, because all that comes to my mind is Edward being royally pissed when he finds out that she's only 18 and a freshman. She's fucked.
| CLee56 chapter 31 . 7/5/2014
Poor baby, drugs and alcohol don't mix as much as you may think you have control.
| Jas chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
You should defiantly publish this story with different names obviously. It would be soo popular I would so buy it :)
| CLee56 chapter 28 . 7/5/2014
Jasper just had to open his mouth.
| CLee56 chapter 27 . 7/5/2014
Edward needs to learn to curb that enthusiasm.