Reviews for There Will Be Blood
Patriciadiane chapter 6 . 6/16
So Edward is not an angel and it will be interesting to see if he cleans up his act
Alice went rogue on Jasper but I'm impressed that she had Bella's back
Loved the line where Edward and Emmett looked at Jasper when he spoke SOUTHERN...FUNNY
Patriciadiane chapter 5 . 6/16
I'm exhausted from just reading about all of the shopping but I don't like shopping. Poor Bella and then blood on the top of that...
Patriciadiane chapter 4 . 6/16
Heck of a family dinner. Emmett needs fashion advice - Miami Vice really

The V family is out there
Patriciadiane chapter 3 . 6/16
Bella is going to be wide-eyed for sure. Alice is Alice. Charlie is a good dad and wants her to have opportunities not liking Mike
Patriciadiane chapter 2 . 6/16
So Edward definitely has issues and I don't mean just be in the mob. The whole attending church thing was actually funny as Esme was thumping on him to pay attention/
Patriciadiane chapter 1 . 6/16
Heck of a first chapter. What a hook
Guest chapter 23 . 6/7
bella is crazy edwards life will paint a huge target on her back how did she accept it so easily its not believable
Guest chapter 18 . 6/5
well this chapter disappointed me greatly and i was enjoying this story up to this point firstly maybe not all the women were bad and were forced into prostitution after all he was running a human trafficking ring so how they can say the women were bad is wrong so they killed innocent women who had been severly abused secondly the most innocent victims unable to defend themselves and had no choice where their lives went was the dogs YOU DONT FUCKING KILL DOGS FFS U HEARTLESS BASTARDS they were innocent. On another note they take alec in no questions asked wen hes unable to answer any of carlisle questions but hes threatened to kill bella i mean WTF someone needs to tell bella to run far and fast now. It also proves all the cullens are evil even esme she may not kill but shes just took spoils so shes no innocent bella is how can edward do this to her
Guest chapter 17 . 6/5
i get its a mafia story blah blah blah and she loves edward or infatuated whatever but i would be so out of there his father hates her and he doesnt even know her and edward is calling her a child i would just make the heartbreaking decision to stay away and live a calm normal life ive always been liked by bf parents when i was young and would tolerate such a lack mof respect
Guest chapter 9 . 6/1
how do u come up with edwards lines he sounds like the worse kind of person he doesnt care about bella at all its infuriating
Guest chapter 8 . 6/1
i hope bella makes him really work for it hes a bastard an doesnt deserve a nice girl like bella especially as all he wants is a quick fuck and bella isnt like that but its ure story and im enjoying it i just think alot of twilight fanfiction edward gets away with way too much and its about time he met his match someone who doesnt fall for his charms and possibly dates someone else
teach2ndgrade chapter 22 . 5/1
“The White Sox never win.” Hahahaha! I’m from Chicago and. White Sox fan... it’s a sad truth.
daphnie chapter 1 . 3/29
Hope you explain how Cullen is Italian mob family name in the late chapters.. Irish would have been a better sell.
la reina de kurama chapter 5 . 3/24
ash no mames , pinche bella
Guest chapter 9 . 3/8
"shinning light" It's SHINING.
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