|Reviews for Life, Love, and the Mafia|
| Kilataia chapter 17 . 2/24
Great story :)!
| Twilight lover chapter 17 . 2/8
dis is the BEST fanfiction I have ever read in my life...
| mondaineronisha chapter 10 . 11/30/2013
I love this storyline.
| Far too Young chapter 17 . 10/15/2013
I enjoy the whole concept of the story but I'm not sure how much I love the finished product. What I see is an abusive husband who is violent and aggressive and doesn't really change. Bella continues to love him even though he is abusive. I just don't see it. She should have left once see realized how far deep she was. I don't know. It was good when it comes to quality of writing and all that jazz but I just feel like Bella embraces the abusive tendencies will open arms. Sure, she leaves but she should have fought like hell to get away from him. Or, even went to Alice, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie, or his parents for help. The way you wrote their characters made it seem like they would have been up for that.
| Artemis2000 chapter 17 . 9/24/2013
Loved the story. By the way, the names were just fine. Ignore the bad comments.
| jupiter2005 chapter 17 . 9/17/2013
great story i enjoyed that cant wait to read more stories. keep up the good work
| Hey Hey chapter 17 . 9/9/2013
look DEE you are an amazing talanted writter ok . So when someone says change the names I think that they need to just sit down chill for a second that is like if they had twins and they named them and took there time with picking out the perfect names and there friend just told them hey the names you picked and loved for your children are good but i don't like them so change them. Its like hey if you don't like why not just one not read the story or two get over it. And ps I love the story great . Edward (two words) Temper-Temper lol love it and update soon find mee ast jasminwilson12
| angleface12 chapter 3 . 9/5/2013
that was a perfect beginning to their lives together
| angleface12 chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
wow how could any woman sleep after he called.
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
a very nice story
i like the possesive edward
| heyjued chapter 17 . 7/25/2013
This started out somewhat rough around the edges but as you continued, it flowed a little better.
| thehorseoftwilight chapter 17 . 7/15/2013
I love your story ! I think it's dosen't mater that you stop hir the story ;) sorry for my bad english but i'm french :)
| saintfudge chapter 17 . 7/10/2013
Great quick read..do like my mob stories with a little ,ore blood and guts.. Off to find the sequel ..thanks for sharing ..have fun
| saintfudge chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
short sweet chapters love them ...
| saintfudge chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
just found this story - like a good mob story - like the start of this a little different from others ..off i go on this ride with you (i know i am late to the party but i now only read completed stories and not WIPS - have been let down too many times by stories that i love and have followed for months only for them never to be completed ) thanks and have fun ...