Reviews for gordie vs bruno
Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
spell Shmuel's name right please.
raphiellxcasteil321 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
did he died
FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
THIS IS TERRIBLE! I'm sorry, but you CAPITALIZE names, and DON'T capitalize random words like "quick". And you put quotation marks around quotes!

"This needs a beta or something." I say.
Composingjealousy chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Horrible.