Reviews for Apples Don't Stray
Rolletti chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
Wow, that was just an amazing story. Thanks for sharing.

Rolletti
AndThenBigBangHappened chapter 4 . 12/29/2010
Great writing! I really enjoyed reading it...

Loved the little brother big brother moments..Sammy sleeping at the foot of Dean's bed...grasping Dean's wrist after a nightmare! adorable :)
Coragyps chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
This was really cute, I think Dean in season 6 wishes he could go back to this time. I snickered at "fun sized Sammy" - so adorable! Great job and thanks for sharing.
ziggy.uk chapter 4 . 9/4/2010
Just knew Sam would leave the room and that Dean would be a little p*ssed off with him as he knew what Sam had done when he didn't pick up the phone! And trust them both to still feel guilty about Sam getting kidnapped, Sam for actually being kidnapped whilst in the car park and Dean because he had left Sam alone to take a leak! Thank goodness they sorted it out in the end! Hopefully after a good nights sleep they will both be feeling better! Loved Sam's comment at the end of this story "We should have gone to Vegas."

A really entertaining read, thanks.
ziggy.uk chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
Gotta love 'em, both boys wanted to take care of the other but with Sam having the flu he doesn't really stand a chance of overruling Dean and getting him to rest and let his injuries heal! At least they have found a half decent motel for the night and hopefully Dean will be able to get the med supplies he needs from the local pharmacy. Just hope for Sam's sake he doesn't leave that motel room!
ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
Thanks to Karen who wanted sick Sammy stuck in the Impala! Just gotta love the boys, each one more concerned about the other and insisting they are okay when they obviously aren't! Trust big brother Dean to win out in the end, but with Sam puking his guts up on the roadside he was kinda at a disadvantage!
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Great start to this story. They are both battered and bruised after The Benders and believable that Dean would want to get out of town asap but Sam would want him to rest for the night. And what a gory nightmare Dean had, not surprised it caused him to wake. Sam won't be too pleased that falling asleep on Dean's ankle has made his big brother realise that he has a fever!
Desertfyre chapter 4 . 8/26/2010
Awww, beautiful story! Greatly enjoyed it!
CeCe Away chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
This is great. I adored how both of them kept trying to take care of each other. You have their personalities down to perfection. Loved it.
pandora jazz chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
I like how you wrapped up your story.

It was nice how Dean and Sam were trying to take care of each other, Dean with Sam's illness and Sam with Dean's injuries. You did a great job with the description of Sam's symptoms.

Thanks again for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed reading it.
Madebyme chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
I very much enjoyed this final chapter. You tied it all up nicely.

It was about time that these boys talked about their true feeling surrounding the hunt. Sam's guilt and Dean's fear. But what stood out most for me was the care and understanding that they offer each other. Both taking care of each other. As partners. A team. But more importantly as a family.

I liked how you brought up Sam's OCD tendencies and Dean masking his fear at leaving the motel as anger at Sam getting the ice. Lovely little touches.

Thank so much for sharing. Take care, Madebyme
KKBELVIS chapter 4 . 8/7/2010
I love Sam thought they should go to Vegas, too.

So cute.

I adore Sick Sam - as you know!

Thank you so very much for taking time out to write this for us!

The brother moments are sweet and tenderly written without being girly.

I can't get enough. Great chapter. Nice and long and full of fluff.

And Sam sleep-talking...Warm fuzzy. He he.

Wonderful!

Karen
skag trendy chapter 4 . 8/7/2010
'"Dean?"

"Hm?"

"We should have gone to Vegas."

Dean smiled. Apparently, the apple really doesn't fall too far from the tree.'

This was the ultimate. But the whole chapter was just full of all those bro-mos that we've missed out on.

Cheers m'love. Had a great time with this chappy.

Kind regards,

ST xxx
Cainchan chapter 4 . 8/7/2010
ohh this was a sweet last chapter. Sam, who would like to help his stupporn older brother and got painkillers etc. to easy dean's pain. hehe I also liked it that you brought Sam's OCD in - hehe I always like stories about sam's ocd tendencies.

It was also so sweet how dean took care of his little brother and at the end where he but his leather jacket on sams lying and fevered form was really cute. :-)

thank you.
Cainchan chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
really nice chapter. :-)
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