Reviews for Esme and The Riding Crop
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
Great Story - thanks for writing it :-)
borednhomealone chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Wow, that was hot stuff! *fans self* Loved it!
Cris.P.C chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
God, I was laughing so hard at Carlisle's reactions XDDDDDD It was great, so sexy and hot, I love how they give pleasure to each other. x) And it's just your first time, wow, you're really good at this. ;) Awesome. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
PSH! ESME! That last text was very naughty!
Jordan-of-forksx chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
i loved the ending , lol
Ennah1887 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Wow. Just wow. So hot!
WitchChild17 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Erotic. I feel like so turned on. That's all I have to say.
TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Loved it. Need more ! DeeDee/Mickey
Deviouslytwisted chapter 1 . 12/22/2012

That was so good!

You need to write some more of that because that made me feel just...WOW!

Awesome Job!
Atramentous StygianIron chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
This is one of the best sex stories I have ever red.
Please continue!
Cumor chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
LOL. Loved it! Funny thing is after I read "Breaking the Rules" I got to thinking about how to work that crop into a story myself. My ideas go in a slightly different way but end up somewhere in your neck of the woods. It's one of those things that still sits in the back of my mind because I'm not sure if my version of Carlisle is strong enough to submit but I absolutely love that you picked that up and ran with it. Nice job.
the Vampire of Gorillaz chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Ah fuck that was a good story x very yummy . PET :P yummy xxxx 3-

Lovin it

Edwards Vampire Xx

Danielle Isabella Rose Hollister xx
Rachael Fairbanks chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
All I've got to say is DAMN.

I would have never, ever thought in my wildest dreams that Esme actually had all that in her! Guess we learn something new everyday, don't we? You should do another one of these, perhaps where Carlisle is the dominant and Esme is the submissive? I'd like to see where that could go. That was amazing, and the funny thing is that I don't usually go for the freaky sexual spankings, either! But, I guess we find other tastes everyday! That was so HOT and so well written. Keep it up. LOVED IT.

logan chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
this is like the best story ive ever read
100PercentCarlisle chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I love it, but then I was half way there just at the mention of Carlisle. lol
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