Reviews for Denial
Venus914 chapter 7 . 4/23/2013
Wow...i love the intensity and the emotion. ) I wish i can write as well as you.
Maggie chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
Too many parenthesis. It's disruptive and distracting. I stopped reading at this chapter because I couldn't stand it. I'm sorry. :-(
Mckirk-lover chapter 7 . 8/3/2012
very good. sad sweet and good. loved it
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
Great story :) I really enjoyed your style too :)
anon chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I really like your story, it has a lot of depth to it and it isn't rushed. Good grammar and word choice, and I love how you write both Jim and Bones! The only thing I would do is cut down on your use of parenthesis. It's really distracting, for me anyway, and I kept having to reread the sentences to make sense of some things. Other than that good job! :)
lauthom chapter 7 . 9/8/2011
Wow. Love it!
alydhe chapter 7 . 5/24/2011
Oh gee, thanks a lot! Now you've gone and *melted* me! I'm in a puddle of fluffy goo, ruining the carpet and most likely shorting out my keyboard, and it all your fault!

It's all just to shiny and sweet and I just want to take it home with me and cuddle it forever but I can't because goo can't cuddle. I hope your pleased. lol. _~ (favs)
writerchick0214 chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
First Bones/Jim story every! While I'm still all about Spock/Jim, I have to admit this was awesome...and refreshing! Thanks for opened my eyes to a different pairing
FireHeart Alchemist chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
Oh my God! Where the hell did this genius come from? Usually, I'm not a huge supporter of Jim/Bones, but daaaaaamn. You capture Bones perfectly, and I really get it, and I love it!
aomoa chapter 7 . 2/26/2011
great fic :
DoritoCloud chapter 7 . 2/14/2011
Write more multi-chapter stories of this pairing. PLEASE. This was just amazing.
Doni chapter 7 . 11/25/2010
Great story! While the parentheses made the flow a bit chopy, I thought it perfectly matched poor Bones' jumbled, pained thoughts. Touching and sexy!
ameliapond chapter 7 . 11/10/2010
Not to be critical, but far too much of the story is put in brackets. it makes it difficult to read and concentrate on.

Other than that I LOVED this story. It was well written and i felt i could identify with the characters.

Enjoyed it muchly, thanks.
Allego chapter 7 . 11/4/2010
I'll make a critic and I hope you won't take it bad, because it is really not meant to be nasty at all.

I think you should really put less parentheses and shorten your sentences. I don't mean by writing less, but by putting some of what you put in parentheses as some whole independant sentences.

The way it is right now, the chapters are way more complicated to read than they should be. Because it breaks the rhythm of the text. And it's a pretty good text. I love the story, their interaction and this weird relashionship Jim ad Bones have. I really like it or I wouldn't have spent any time to right all this. I really think it's good. But I almost stop reading it at the first chapter because of all the ().
RogueAngel chapter 7 . 10/8/2010
Lovely and touching and too beautiful. Well Done. - RA
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