Reviews for Airplanes
ThoseRandomTigers chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Poor sods. I have no idea what N was doing there. Was he trying to annoy them deliberately, or trying to figure out why trainers train? Probably. White and Black could've had a nice dance. They still can, I suppose. I like the mention of there being no stars in Castelia City. It's a city problem. I ended the story blushing. Not sure what N did to draw the whole room's attention, though.
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
NNNAAAWWWWWW THE ENDINGGGGGGGGGG. IT LEFT ME SPEECHLESS MAN
Atemxyugi kfXjinx chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
~~Pony:COME ONBLACK!TAKE WHITE BAK FROM DAT DORK!

oh by deh way,im kinda confused Crimson N? i mean dat deh part of when deh stor' dait 'red eyes' dats when i got u lik PLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZ do lik,P.M. 2 lik answer moi? tx.

GO CHESS GO!

booooooo dorky here! lol ;)

~~Pony
moonlight menuett chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
AHHH! LOVE it!
WonderHeroe chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
actually, the rivals name is N, but i just found that out not too long ago...

great story! maked me want to write something about N!
Chew-a-Pick chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Wow, this is the best BlackxWhite fic I've come across in this site so far. :D

(Ignoring the fact that there's yet to be that many of them...yet.)

I love how you give characters into each of them-not to mention a "flirty" rival feels kinda fresh compared to the previous ones...heh. :D Both Black and White's characters seem kinda typical, but I think they work just fine in this fic.

Anyway, "Grey" seems like a more likely name rather than "Crimson"...but maybe that'd be too predictable. :q

Shouldn't "they" in the last line be "there"?
sakura-fai chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Cont.?

...black is prof elm's son really?

and who's this rival?

wanna write airplane for alexandriashipping? ;P
TheGiftOfHeavenSun chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Heey... This is a very good story. I don't know why, but I dislike this crimson guy.

Compared to my newest fic, you are far better than me.

I hope i can write story like you...
ObsessedwithBirds chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
That was very ungentlemanly of Crimson to do that. I should kick his ass. lmao.
The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
...Airplanes. I just read another story that was called this too, inspired by the same song, so excuse my WTF moment. XD

Ohh Crimson is so awesome. Love that guy. *grins* If he's not as awesome in game as he is here, I will forever write him this way just to support how great YOU write him.

Last thing we need is another jerkass rival like Blue/Gary, right?

Note to White: If you swear a part of something broke inside of you at the moment that your BFF turns cold, it's a SIGN.

Yeah. Rambling. But I seriously love your Chesshipping/Monochromeshipping stories. Fave~! And do you want me to write another? Otherwise I'll put it off with the crud load of other stories I plan on "getting to".
fooboo24 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Great job! And does Cheren (Japanese) mean Crimson in English?
Hydrag chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
So...very interesting...it was also very cute! I liked the saying 'Oh my Arceus!' XD very creative and nice job! Oh? Did you say you was going to make a sequel? Please do!