Reviews for Missed Opportunities
Mini Wolfsbane chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Nice job. Since re-reading the series, I realized that Marco and Rachel have a very similar relationship to a pairing in one of my

favorite animes (Risa and Otani in Lovely Complex), so

I'm starting to 'ship them a little, to my surprise.

I usually don't go for the "alternative-never-gonna-happen"

type pairings, but they intrigue me in this second go round.

Tobias and Rachel now has this stale "been there, done that" feeling to it, but Rachel/Marco is new and exciting to me.

Anyway, great job on your fanfic. Short and leaves the

reader wanting more. I liked it. Please keep up the great work!
MITHMITHMYTHMYTH chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Tobias is one of my fave characters, but I feel sorry for Marco.

I love Fan Fictions when the tough girl that beats the boy up all the time kiss/hug/anything. :)
Bittersweet Angels chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
this is really good!Sad though, i feel really sorry for Marco. He deserves a gf that won't ditch him for a hawk ;)i really enjoyed it