wait I'm confuse, just what happen to Aida that makes Mikan want to avenge her so bad? By the way, thanks for the update :)

:D

I had wondered how Mikan had known about Aida. This explains it very nicely :)

Well done once again, looking forwards to the next chapter, please update soon-and people better review!

K

Thank you very much for this story.

Till a view chapters I didn't understand, what this story is about. But now I'm even more thrilled.

I just love your writing style. I also read other of your fanfics.

Please update soon! Thanks

So that's how Mikan knew everything that was goin on..

So, is Mikan going to pretend she's Aida and wait for whoever wants to kill her or She'd do something else entirely? Hmmm..

Thanks for the update btw.. Hope you'd get lesser to none silent readers..

I just read your story and I think even tho the chapters are short, the quality of you writing makes up for it. :) More power and keep up the good work. The storyline is good, too.

im confused on the part of princess Aida.. oh well.. i hope the rest of the chapters will answer them.. :D

so that's how Mikan knew of Aida's death... now i know.. :D

I suppose that elder is the main suspect...

Nice story... At least from the beginning natsume and mikan are alrdy in love with each other... XD

but I still want to know how they met and fall in love with each other when they were five

I love ur short chapters! Easy to read XD

I really like this story! They're really short but as the saying goes: quality over quatity! And your chapter are definitely quality

update.

so...is she planing to discover the murderer by the trully shock of his face? as he is looking at Mikan and he thinks that she is her sister? that would be interesting. or...does she has another plan?

i hope MIKANxNATSUME and get married, they so deserve each other, they love no matter what? and they are so...mewnt to be.

please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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please UPDATE really soon!

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UPDATE! My GOD THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY! And actually, I think the trabbles thing is a good idea. ANYWAYS~ UPDATE!

No! Don't stop updating! I even moved my lazy butt to type this review. It took a lot of effort. B)

It's really confusing. I mean, I get the whole italics flashback thing, but even then it's still so confuzzling. - That's probably how you meant it to be though.

I am also missing the lack of action between Natsume and Mikan. I'm naturally shallow, and I read fanfics for good ole fluff. The beginning looked like a very good potential fluff, but this plot is kinda slow...

I understand that you're still laying everything out, what with the flashbacks 'n' all, but it's getting kinda boring. I think it's probably 'cause the chapters are too short for me to really bond with the characters.

But don't let me keep criticizing you! I'm sure you have everything planned out. 8- Your writing is very good, and usually people with good writing have good stories, so I'll keep reading in the meantime. D I really do think that this fic has a lot of potential. ')

oh..so that's what 'them' means.. so Mikan and Natsume are gonna track down whoever killed her twin sister.. or maybe Mikan already knows and is going to reveal everything to the elders. or maybe the culprit is one of the elders.. lots of possibilities about 'them'..

Lovely chapter as usual.. Keep up the good work!