Mikan! Just hear the reason for pete's sake.. I'm totally curious as of why Natsume had to drag you back...

Nice update as always! , Oh, and please do not worry. Your story is really good. 3

Another Cliff Hanger. seriously. i'm on the edge of my seat, dying to know what happens next.

I know what you mean about the hits but no reviews...kinda the reason I stopped writing...besides several other reasons.

Anyways, another well done chapter. I'm curious of something, and I may be wrong, because my Japanese is wonderfully horrible, but when you say Kaoru-ba-chan, is the 'ba' part not short for obaa, as in grandmother?

Please correct me if I'm wrong, I could probably stand to learn a lesson, haha.

Hopefully Mikan will find out, even if she doesn't want to know why she was brought back

Storm

It's not that I don't want to review, it's just that I don't have anything to say about it. It's a good story(so far), but since the chapters are short there isn't really all that much going on at the moment. And I understand pretty much everything(it's quite clear and easy to read), your grammar and writing abilities are good(since I haven't caught an errors) and there isn't all that much to question. Except for maybe, who kidnapped her, what does Yuka have in store, what does Kaoru mean, Does Natsume ever call her name without suffixes, etc etc. But that's all we'll figure out in later chapters.

But I say keep at it, it's a good, easy read and I can tell it's only going to get even better as it progresses.

Hello (:

Nice story you've got there!

Very interesting and unusual (:

Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what's up next (:

its been long since ive read your stries nee-chan! :D still very good even though they're short trabbles... :)

i like your new pen name.. hehe... was shocked at first though.. haha...

What's the favor? ;D

thanks for this chapter! :)

i'll remember your pen name. :)

about this chap..

it is so natsume..this chap is..because the fact that he had hard time processing such request but maitained his cool is just him (well, minus a few grunts but nevertheless - it's him alright)

progress is at hand but i can't yet decipher what would happen next..it excites me :)

few questions:

it seems that there was a past between mikan and natsume (i know i should have asked it, a chapter before this)..how were they related?

and a follow up would be, how old are they now?

what will be kaoru's business in the coming chap? (well, other that the fact that she is the head of the healing team)

wooohooo..

WRITE ON!

new pen name is cool! thanks for longer chapters and recent updates!

what is Natsume going to ask from his mother? i really hoe MIKANxNATSUME really soon!

please UPDATE really soon!

;-)

I'm sure you've heard this a million times already from others, but what in the world was Mikan disowned and banished for? Hopefully we'll be able to find out.

And some curiosity regarding what Natsume is going to ask his mother!

New name I see. It's a good one.

Looking forward to seeing more

Storm

Lol, no I love seeing OOC, most of the time. You've done very well with it, so no complaints here! That's a very interesting rule regarding the royalty. Can't wait to see the next chapter, going to read it now :)

Storm

ahaha.. that was expected.. Natsume is kind of predictable.. .' That's why she needs Mikan in her life to make it amazing. lol.

..Anyways. nice chapter! at least, we get to know that Natsume's mother is alive in your story.. I wonder what advice he would get.. hmm..

Something big must have happened for Mikan to get disowned..

I'm getting curious every chapter..

And Awwww.. they've loved each other solely since 5.. that's amazing and romantic. Natsume must be surprised with Mikan's request.. that was something. can't wait for NatsumexMikan moments.. ,

So Yuka regretted dis-owning Mikan? Anyway, what did Mikan do until Yuka disowned her? That question always bugs me..

Keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward for the next chappie.. :3