This is really good. I love the rules you have in place for this tale (I just started reading it once you got to this point, so there are no reviews from me prior to this chpater). I feel bad for Mikan and Natsume. What's keeping him from calling her by her name at all times? He's already broken one rule, why not more?

i really like this story and cant wait for the next chapter.

awwww~ hahaha

thanks so much for this chapter! :D

please...let Natsume be her's, together they are so KAWAII!

please UPDATE really soon!

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Well, the rule is kinda strange, but oh well.. :)

Keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward for the next chapter.. :D

i love it! the story is unfolding..their relationship and the things that happened in the past!

but of course you left out the 10-year gap...hmmm, what did mikan do to deserve such banishment, i mean if you're going to do the math she was young when that happened..

if you're a kid of a royal clan, what could trigger the others to take you out...hmmm...

configurating.

questions, questions...

i just loved the fact that it's not the usual damsel and distress story.

i love it when mikan plays heroine. :)

i guess you could say that i'm a sucker for femme fatale, mikan may not be that seductive but she definitely has charms :)

WRITE ON.

ahem, i now have a review :)

Oooh! This is soo fun 3

Told you, I'll review!

Waah, Mikan is soo serious here in the last chapter. So is Natsume. The story is getting intense by the minute :)

Update soon :D

~Sung

awww, this story is so cute .

i am very much amused on how things are starting to wrap up..

i mean..very much intrigued.

what's this fuss about mikan trying to evade such words from natsume.

from it's standpoint, i could say that natsume is part of the royal guards and since mikan is a free spirit, she does not want the throne..or there could be another mystery to it why mikan would not like to be called royalty...

i just can't put my finger on it..there are so little clues, but in time i'll be albe to filter it out!

haha..(me trying her hardest to be a deditective wannabe!)

but please do continue the story, it's refreshing :)

WRITE ON!

thanks for the fast updates! i really like it! :)

I wish that the chapters could be longer! But I realize that these are trabbles. Still.

Yay, the two meet again, and exchange words...and actions, lol, Mikan attacked him. The characters seem a bit OOC, Natsume never seems to show that much patience in the manga, and Mikan is hardened...from what has happened in the past? I cannot wait to see what will happen next. Mikan is revealed to be the princess, what does that make Natsume?

I hope you get enough reviews to update soon-I want to know what happens!

Storm

And so she awakes. And not to the best of moods, I'm very curious to the past and what happened. Perhaps we will find out as the chatpers progress?

And he apologizes again! Whatever for?

Storm

Ten years have passed? I wonder what caused her to leave and change her name? Hopefully will find out in the next few chapters. Ah, also, I like how you're going from Mikan to Natsume's POV chapter to chapter, gives you a different perspective of what they are thinking. Course...its hard to see what Mikan is thinking when she's unconscious...

Excellent work, until the next one

Storm

How interesting, this look like it will be an amazing read. Ninja clans and royalty? Hmmm, can't wait to see the rest. I wonder what exactly the male is apologizing for?

Storm

wow! her, a princess and a rebellion? and what is Natsume to her? her bodyguard or something?

please UPDATE rally soon!

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