Reviews for While She Slept
Happyfish chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
This is interesting. Which one will she choose?
lyra chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
god damn cliffhanger!

which leads where?
Sexykitsune-hime chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
love the story so far.
writertron chapter 3 . 11/3/2010
O.o

... wow. this is kinda creepy in its sense of danger and whatever the thing is that jareth and dorcus know and sarah knows nothing of... you're maintaining the ominous atmosphere excellently... and don't think i didn't notice that although sarah asked for herself and her family to be left alone, jareth only promised her family, the tricky bastard...

more? please? i can hardly wait to see how this knot unravels...
notwritten chapter 3 . 11/1/2010
Good reading. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
Elliesmeow chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
Hmmm...I wonder how Sarah will choose. Not what, what is a forgone conclusion, but how she comes to her decision interests me very much.:)

Thanks for posting!

-Ellie
scifigeek10 chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
Awesome update! was the Alice reference a hint for her to choose the mirror?
waterflower20 chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
I'm fairly certain she will make the bad choice...Wish she don't but they always for some reason do the wrong one...And she's just a little more than a child...How old is she in this fic?
waterflower20 chapter 2 . 10/31/2010
Oh my...Is Sarah supposed to be some kind of Fae or something?...I must see the movie...I like it so far...Still confused but after i watch the movie i think it all will clear out...Was Dorcus in the movie?
waterflower20 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Well i thougth is hould give Labyrinth a try...Since i haven't see the movie i'm a little confused but this story sounds promising...
Glitter Poisoned My Blood chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
This looks good! I can't wait for it to continue!
notwritten chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
artseblis chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
How intriguing! I look forward to reading more of this story.
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Well, I'm not sure what's going to change but I hope Sarah will learn to accept it so she can be happy.

Thanks for posting!
spartiechic chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I'm intrigued and await your next chapter.