Reviews for Of Onyx Eyes and Metal Collars
NeverEverFaceTheDark chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
that was one of the most horrifying things I have ever read. well done.
demonseed chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Good story,you should write more...
Max chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Intense, I loved it
vote for LOTS chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
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shadowglove chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I have never been one for torture, and yet I found this story disturbing hot. will there be a sequel to this?
LurkerReader chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
My god. You are amazing. I want more of these, plz tell me this isn't the end of your trilogy. I feel sort of bad for never wanting Kahlan to escape, her need and Obsession for Cara should go deeper in your next one. Wonderful writing!
Snagam80 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I'll be truthful here. You have a gift for writing BDSM in it's most cruelest form. That is one truth.

Another truth. Even though I enjoyed your story I find it hard to reconcile that enjoyment with my inner turmoil of hating Kahlan being so abused with seemingly no salvation in sight. I guess I'm just upset you've ended the Trilogy at this point.

I suppose I wanted Kahlan to find something inside of herself - to find a way back to her magnificent strength. To reverse the roles between her and Cara. And though you, as the ultimate mistress of this tale, gave her a chance to do just that - it was a cheat and didn't come from any inner strength. It would have been a lie so... it made sense you made her refused the offer. Kahlan is, after all... a Confessor of Truth. Maybe there is some shadow of strength left inside Kahlan Amnell, Mother Confessor, after all.
commandSeven chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
The subject matter was too much for me-but you are an incredible writer. Do you have any published books? Fanfic is great but I was just wondering if you explore other things than bsdm, etc etc in your writings. No disrespect intended. ~thanks
annde28 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Awesome story! Please forgive the late review, but I have been working on a story of my own. After reading yours, I feel like I have many miles to go to catch up with you. Your writing is truly impressive. Seriously. Thanks for yet another awesome story, and I hope to be able to read more of your work!
kylie chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Easily the best cara/kahlan fic I've ever read. I really felt Kahlan's craziness for Dahlia & her descent into submitting for Cara and it was oh so perfect. It was so addicting, I had to read it a few times. Not sure I can ever look at kahlan the same and I love it! PLEASE write more like this, I'm begging you! Mistress rules.
ewww chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
wow.fanfic chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Jesus, holy shit and wow! Dahlia's tongue? Seriously?

That was so twisted and erotic I'm, well clearly not speechless, but let's just say I had to lay down and 'rest' (a couple of times) before writing this feedback. Thank you so much and please write more of this...yeah, yeah, yeah, I have issues, but hey they are fun issues.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 7/7/2010