|Reviews for Without Each Other|
| Buddy chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
It is a very sad beginning but has a lot of pottential for a joyous reunion. The laughter and jokes of both groups in chapter two is also well placed I believe because they are trying to release the tention of the situation. Very well done, keep it up.
| plantina chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
nice story , hope they get the girls out. update soon
| ThePurpleDragoness chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
| Dorkshawty chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
The chapter moved a little fast for me, but that's just a personal preferance. And I think out of all the girls, at least Toph would have put up a fight, but they should've fought more. The Avatar girls are strong.
But I do like the concept of the guys trying to get back the girls. I think you should add more detail so the reader can better feel the emotions of the characters; would make the story go up a level!
That's just my constructive criticism, I hope it helps!
| klut-Z-girl chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
i dont like the way you made all the girls helpless, but it is a good idea and i want to read the next chapter ASAP