I love Martha Kent :) She is amazing women loving mother and wise senator :) It was sad that Lana's life was so bad but I liked how reasonable that conversation was :D
And that scene with paperclips was cute. Cuteness overload :D

good story

that was two great chapters.

i saw on a youtube vidoe tom welling saying he would like to have lana lois and clark all in the same room. would 2 i think it would be a one hell of a scene

I really liked your story...Clois is so cute! Can't wait to read more.