Reviews for Fire Flower
greenrabit56 chapter 9 . 1/17/2014
I have no words to express how i feel about that
Guest chapter 12 . 1/8/2014
This is a great story! Why don't you finish it? It's well written and interesting.
supersta126 chapter 12 . 2/26/2012
Keep going
Shadow Quil chapter 12 . 8/30/2010
Aww, it's lovely! I think Sokka should have her, but not before Zuko puts up a fair fight! Maybe an actualy FIGHT? By the way, does she had gold or brown eyes? Or another colour that isn't completely typical in the Fire Nation?
MissLizziebeth chapter 12 . 8/28/2010
I love this story! Which is amazing as I hardly ever find a good Avatar: The Last Airbender fanfic that I like. (I'm very picky with my selections :P) Soooo, while I really love Sokka, I do want to see what will happen between Zuko and Hanabyuu (haha :D) as well. Keep writing xxx
manspray chapter 4 . 8/7/2010
you know zuko is azula's younger brother, right?
shel263 chapter 12 . 8/4/2010
This story is really good, I like the way you've made Hanabyuu into an OC that doesn't get annoying. Awesome work, update soon!
StarnightX chapter 11 . 7/30/2010
I'm hooked! Lookin' forward to another chapter soon.
xBildenxSiexLachelnx chapter 11 . 7/23/2010
I really like this. I am into Hanabyuu very much. I can't wait for an update. It's very good.

Suni-Dlight chapter 10 . 7/20/2010
Cool chapters :-D both number 9 and 10. I was waiting for these. I hope Hanabi gets back to her new friends but I'm going to need for them not to keep leaving her behind lol. Anyway, your poem at the end of 9 was good too. I think we've all been there before. You're friend should come around, hun, or you could find someway to get him to listen to you. Write him a letter but eventually itll all work out.

Keep writing!
Kurohane Ookami chapter 10 . 7/20/2010
toomuchinfo chapter 9 . 7/19/2010

Very good.

And I love Hana- Hanyuu! She's a good person! Will you be making her a bender, because by her personality and such, she seems like the air-bender type.


Hehe, I would love to see her with Zuko. Sokka can be a dick sometimes, and I happen to like Zuko much better. He doesn't seem as fake as everyone else. If you know what I mean.

And for whatever that rant was for, I do hope you get over it. I've never been in love. Hell, I've been single for my entire life (14 years as of yesterday), so I don't think there's much I can say.

Update soon~


Lt. Sarcasm
helpfulDeathgod chapter 8 . 7/18/2010
This is all turning out very nicely. I have to say this is well written but can get better. You may want to try to read it after you type it so you know that everything you wanted came out.

I would like to see her with Zuko though...there are too many Zuko/OC-benders. We need to see more normal people. And having an escaped slave is even better.
Devanelle chapter 8 . 7/18/2010
yay i love OC fics. I wish you would give us agood description of Hanyuu. Maybe from another persons POV? that way we could compare how she sees gerself and how others do:)
Cathartic Lives chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
EPP! I love this story, it's going to be one of my favourites, I like the way you write, it is really good, I thought that it would make an excellent prolouge for an actual novel.

You've got the potential of an author!

lulu-belle xox
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