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| Simona chapter 1 . 1/24
Sakura acts as a b*ch in this story, almost too hateful towards her ex-teammate and for such long time! Can I excuse her saying she doesn't really know any better? I don't really know...
As for Danzo, the elders and Iruka...
Danzo deserved what happens to him, even more so, he deserved worse and maybe he died too quickly...
The elders also deserved what happend to them for approving the killing of many innocents...
Iruka was his mistake indeed, but he paid dearly for it!...
As for Naruto, he betrayed his "ninja way" and his heart and chosed to forget about it in the arms of "the-next-best-thing" Gaara (sorry, Gaara, but this is the truth)...
And after reading the whole story, I can't say that Naruto (I don't talk about Sakura and Kakashi because they don't really matter in this story narative) deserved Sasuke's love, loyalty and sacrifice...
In the end, Sasuke prouved himself to be the most noble from all of them!...
But I must confess that "A living sun" part is the one that I understud the least...
What teamwork speaks Naruto about? Sasuke protected Konoha and Naruto for four years singlehandedly, shunned and forgoten by his peers... Where was the teamwork in this?
What friendship is Naruto talking about? Where was this frienship when, for four years he forgets about Sasuke, no one in Konoha talks about him and even his name is shunned and hated by the ones he protected with his life?
Oh! I understand! He choose to forget about this period and talks about their younger days... the hokage that can get second chances...
BUT, ALL IN ALL, THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL TRAGIC STORY!
THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT!
| clarityace chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
One of the most beautiful (and saddest btw) one-shots I've read here. I've read this multiple times already and I still go back to read it again every once in a while. As I've finished reading this for the nth time, I just thought I'd tell you how much I loved it. XD
| syrraki chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
;-; *wibble* this is so lovely.
| Common Sense chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
A damned good one-shot as I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.
| ranika chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
that is THE best fik i have ever read!
| Pecha Pichu chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Great story! ~ and this isn't the average "oh-you're-so-good-but-no-other-comment" type of review.
A beautiful story of angst, tragedy and friendship, and we can see Sasuke's hurt feelings all the way through, his desire to protect his beloved. As Konoha turn him away, he feels a turmoil of hurt and shock, and reminiscences his brother and Naruto when he had a happy life.
My favourite part of was when Madara was explaining to Naruto what Sasuke has done for him - Naruto's so bratty that he doesn't realise. Madara takes the initiative and turns himself into a sort-of protagonist/antagonist and explains Sasuke's efforts to redeem himself as an anti-hero whilst Konoha is the villain for turning him away. Sasuke dies - as is befitting for a hero who has hidden in the past yet no future. He'll be remembered.
"It is the story of two boys, a genius and a dead-last, and their bond."
~ Pecha Pichu
| calliopechild chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
This was great. Really well-written and very well done, and your Sasuke was awesome. My only complaint is why couldn't Sakura save him? Augh... . I know he still wouldn't have fit in within Konoha after that, but still. Sigh. Even with all the sadness, you did a great job, and I loved your ending; it was absolutely perfect. Thanks for a great fic.
| godlet chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
SAD FACEEEEEE D:
| Blake chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Wow. that was awesome, but u shud make 1 less sad
| imperfect-lover chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
So beautiful and well written.
| TheVariable chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I have to admit, I'm not a fan of Sasuke and NaruSasu, but this was just so...how do I put it?
Sasuke's emotions and his feelings were very nicely written. Sakura and Naruto seemed a tad OC in the beginning, but if they really did give up on Sasuke, I suppose they would act like that.
I liked it, very much.
| Ultramarina chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
The story is really comprehensive and detailed. Great job :)
| TheDarkestButterfly chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
This is amazinggggggggg! Best one shot I have EVER read! Omgg favorite!
| West of California chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I'm crying so hard right now XD I feel dumb, but this was absolutely gorgeous, so beautiful and so sad. It's honestly one of the most heart-wrenching pieces I've ever read. This is the most incredible SasuNaru fic ever, in my book. Truly wonderful. Thank you for writing this :3
| Sakura-Moonlight chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
That was more than breathtaking. Really great style of writing.