Reviews for The Road to Yesterday
corkykellems chapter 17 . 3/14
Wow...a brother...that could be a good thing if he let's it...hope he does not try to come between Jake and Bella...Great Story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Bella of course is not being honest. She knew Jake cared for her before Edward came back. Jake saved her ass in more ways then one. She aint telling this dude Jon that she is a user. That she is selfish and cruel. That she kept jake on the hook by throwing him mixed signals, kept yanking his chain. She's making it seem like it was just something that happened. Like to see a story where Jake Gets lots of girls (which he should). Then Bella goes crazy and throws herself in front of truck. Or something where Jake uses Bella like she used him. I would read that!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/27/2013
Bella has no right to be upset. Charlie is in the dark about what his bitch daughter did and should shut his face. I just wish Leah had kicked her ass. Bella has it coming. BTW Bella doesn't sound tough here. She sounds like a whiny, selfish little girl
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
IF eddie is so "great" as husband and in the sack why does she want to leave? He's great so whats the problem.
Tired of sleeping next to a block of ice. Tired of getting touched by something that belongs in the ground or in a coffin at a funeral parlor? Or perhaps Bella is deceiving herself as usual and he aint so great.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Sex between bella and mr sparkle-freeze always sounds nasty. Creepy and slimy. I would think a woman had SERIOUS issues to think that getting poked by a dead guy with a Popsicle for a penis is the height of good sex . Bella is just so...pathetic

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Guest chapter 7 . 12/23/2013
Ohhh Slow down. Jake never forced himself on her. Thats crazy.
Besides Jon is simply taking advantage of her confused state of mind. He's no better than Eddie-kins.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
I think a "life partner" whatever thats supposed to mean, is someone who should both compliment AND complete you. However Edward did neither for Bella. Bella thought life & love should be like the books and plays she read. Like Wuthering Heights or Romeo & Juliet. Throwing your life away at 18 for anyone or anything before you have lived or had a chance to know yourself is not romantic, its lunacy
Forever Mad chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
This is the way Bella should have been portrayed in the books. As at least wanting to taste LIFE a little more, wanting some human experiences to take into sparkle land instead of rush headlong to join the ranks of the undead happy feet club.. NO ONE at 18 years old really knows who they are or what they want. Most dont even know who they are much less there own heart or soul at that point and for S. Meyers to portray such a young emotionally inexperienced woman as being SO sure of such an irrevocable decision really did the stories a tremendous injustice. To be stuck at 18 with no chance of change or growth, slowly losing your family, your friends, your very humanity, and the memories of your life the very things that make a person human, no matter who you are with, does not sound like a perfect forever. It sounds like hell
Chilly Willy chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
Wow! You really have Bella being a total schizo! I have to say however, every time I read about Sparkly & Bella's sexual activities it just CREEPS...ME...OUT. I can not imagine a healthy young woman wanting to be done by a popscicle no matter how nice it is to behold. No warmth. That ice cold touch. ughhhhhh. Makes my skin crawl.
MelkiSihou chapter 17 . 11/3/2013
I like!
snow eopard chapter 17 . 10/29/2013
i love this
Annie D134 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I already love how it's starting keep up the good work. (I'm on the 1st chapter)
Guest chapter 15 . 5/30/2013
This is my favorite sentence in all the story, because I think it sums up the entire story.

Now it wasn't so hard to understand that making love with Jacob would be just as fiery, passionate and carefree as our friendship had been.

Good Lord my heart was thundering throughout the entire story. You are truly good at using simple words very powerfully.
Meg1066 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I love the premise here - what if Edward actually achieved his stated goal? Page-turning story. Also like Jacob's job as a bouncer, which is a logical college job for him. Glad you kept writing!
mrscoleman2009 chapter 17 . 1/19/2013
Loved it!
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