Reviews for Capstone
ninjaeris13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Damn...that was terrifying
Emmers224 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Oh Sam. Another heartbreaker. That's probably my favorite thing about your stories. You don't hold anything back. This was brutal and brilliant. My heart hurt for Sam. All alone and grief stricken, hell bent on a demon deal. You write him very well. And poor Adam. I hate to say it, but the poor guy was screwed the moment he was conceived. His fate does not seem to be a happy one. Anyway, another super awesome fic. I'm completely a fan now!
Bilkan chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
(O_o). Nice story! Seriously yet realistically dark. Loved the prequels... though, thought of commenting all at once. Even though story mainly concentrate on brothers... I kinda envisioned it happening on the show(alas it ain't happening... damn kripke!) BTW, the way Sam reacted on hitting Adam, it is pretty much real... I once hit my younger sibling. I pledged that as long as I would live... I would never hit again... howsoever angry I might be!

Please keep writing more fic on Adam. Being a big brother myself I feel like SPN Winchester's family is incomplete without Adam and well, season 6 is kinda going insane and inhumane.
Laci chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
so, Adam's our righteous man and Sammy's juiced up ridiculously. definitely an innovative idea. this path seems to lead much more keenly to the end of the world...
cookiechainsaw chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Okay let me start off in saying that I have read all your "creepyadamfic" series. It almost makes me cry. It's really that awesome. The pure angst that you have captured is pure Winchester. Poor, unlucky Adam. He needs more love (and luck). Sam's characterisation in this was dark and disturbing (congrats), and his plan is excellent. The way that the seals all still break is incredible and gives that final feeling of devastation in that nothing has changed. Except Adam now rots in Hell too.

But...I've read the next fic.

Bravo. Adam!hugs FTW.
chocodrizzle chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I swear to god this line is from Gossip Girl. I can almost hear her saying it. :P

"Little Sammy Winchester, always dropping the ball, never holding on when it really matters."

Just re-reading your Adam stories.. they're so good, yet so depressing that I'm torn on whether to read them or not.
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Excellent. I love Sam going darkside. ) Are you going to continue?
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
This was so dark that it took several attempts for me to read it, but so well written that I did keep coming back to it even though I usually avoid this type of story. It's definitely compelling.
kitty-krypt chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
OMG My eyes were about to pop out of my head the whole time I was reading this... I didn't want to miss anything. I hope you keep writing this story it would be interesting to see if you could lift the Winchester back after their gloriously mad decent into darkness.

Or at least let all the Winchesters have the last laugh instead of the demons.

Good work keep it up, I enjoy all your fics.
Padawan-BubbyKenobi chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
That's epic. Like, seriously, I was bawling though the entire thing. Just Adam's suicide, Sam's addiction, Bobby, the three Winchester's in Hell, Sam's powers and finally how Adam was so damn BROKEN. It makes total sense that Adam breaks the first seal instead of Dean, because really, what's stopping him from doing it? Anyway, I love it!
TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Oh my Chuck, I inspired EVIL from you! D: This was so sad and emotional, but you managed to make Adam fit right into the season! I loved the way you had Sam describe him and the whole situation, though I hated Sam so much throughout it. I hope you still do the lighthearted ending, but I'd also like to see where you take this, because the possibilities are so endless! Adam's the righteous man (boy), Sam's gone over the top, Dean's being tortured by his little brother! Just, wow, is all I can say. Will the angels raise Adam from Hell? What'll happen with Dean? Can either brother make amends for their dickish attitudes towards Adam? I kind of like that he's got a chance to get back at Dean, at least. All in all, as I said, this is evil, but I liked it (still made me so sad, though) so I'm a little evil, too.
Athena's Owl chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I am so glad I put you on alert, or I never would have thought to look under the M stuff. Yeesh, your mind truly is a very VERY scary place to venture into. Forget about dark, this was pitch black. For some reason I love it...

Henrikson! The guy you love to hate. And wow. Twist much? You were really evil enough to send Adam to hell?

So: Sam's gone totally mojo crazy, Adam is in the middle of torturing Dean, and the whole world is going to shambles. Nice. You gotta wonder what's going on in Dean's mind when, not only does he find out Adam's in hell, but on his why over with a nice sharp piece of kitchenware.

It definitely deserves the M rating (good call) but man is this good. Apparently I also have a sick mind. :)
LonelyGiant chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
You know, I knew Adam would go like that. The ending is a lot darker than I thought it was gonna be. I do love me some dark!Sam though. Are you thinking of taking this in any direction?
SlothKeeper chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Aww, poor Adam. It's sad that he would be the first Winchester to break. No matter what fanfic, he sadly would break easiest. Especially if he just can't pass up the oppertunity. And Sam. That's really sad. He always realizes things too late. And Dean might have hurt Adam physically, but Sam broke Adam. Though I'm now curious if Sam's going to hunt every demon until he gets his brothers back. And if Cas is going to save them or if Adam's just going to enjoy himself. Would be ironic.

Either way, love the angst, hate the Henriksen.

A poor Bobby. He'll never see his "boys" again.

Hope you update Bump in the Night soon or give up another alternate :)