i hope youre doing well chocobo13

Can't say I'm super happy with this fic. There was a lot of built up anticipation with no real payoff. It was a good chase but unsatisfying. Plus I think a slash warning is pointless while a trigger warning would be much more appropriate.

wait who the fuck

Nice! Loved the chase! I’m just disappointed that we didn’t get to see who/what stopped Cloud since the cuts in this chapter tells us that it most likely wasn’t a SOLDIER that we know, considering the fight scene, so maybe a Turk? Idk, wish there was more though because I love the unique spin you put on the usual time travel trope!

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Poor Cloud! I cried this chapter!

What I Think Might Be A Great Friend, please update of you're still in the land of the living. Thank you.

Signing out,
AF

god cloud sure left his wake. i cant wait to read more!

Hahaha, It's so hilarious that Cloud is causing chaos in the wake. Angeal mistaken Cloud's attempt suicide for Genesis's mess or whatever he may have said that cause the cadet to attempt suicide which leads to their fight that made a lot of other soldiers jumped in to try to make them stop. Even though Genesis did said something that cause cloud who was on the brink of breaking down to completely shatter from that and actually breaks down which leads to irrational attempt suicide. It's a good thing Angeal got there on the nick of time otherwise no chocobo cloud any more and Zack will be sad for reasons he may never know.

It really sucks that the planet/lifestream/Aerith send Cloud back in time whether in alternative world or in the past or both doesn't matter, to send him back when he was slowly healing from the past ordeal and actually moving on that is really not cool. Send him back to correct something without any backup or strength to help him combat the situation is nuts. Unless his strength from the future is still in the blood and may need the mako shot in order to have his strength to return to him.

I hope Cloud will able to do something about Genesis & Angeal's situation before history repeats itself and hopefully able to get to Sephiroth before Hojo got to him first with false information and Jenova took over her vessel. What's with the SOLIDER that was in the Psychiatric ward something about a chocobo? Good work and hope to read more of it.

The idea's cool, as far as that "time-travel by Cloud" theme goes.
But it is extremely loooong. And quite messy.
A piece of advice - next time write a timeline, keypoints and a schedule for your story - winging it works only for short or simple-worded stories.

A very entertaining story! Clouds side branching thought's are very funny to read. I couldn't help but laugh on a several occasions (one of them being about beating Sephiroth to death with his picture)! I can't imagine what's going to happen to Cloud next but I can't help but wonder in who's bed he is? I'm sure Sephiroth is not impressed since Cloud indirectly put the entire orientation on hold!

Great work on thees nine chapter!

update please

This story is hilarious and I do hope you will continue with it one day

lololol wat happened?

Cloud, buddy, my friend. We need to have a talk.

Haha! This is amazing! Sorry I didn't have the patience to remember my password to actually sign on, but thank you so much for sharing your story with us thus far. It is really great!