Awesome!It sounds very promisingIt's probably one of the first fics of this kind that I read that didn't have angsty guilt-ridden Cloud.I like ,Sephy won't know what hit him:)Please update soon*puppy eyes*

A wonderul beginning you've got here. Athough it is a well-used theme, the first chapter feels fresh and new, you haven't used the same idea that's been used to death but come up with something uniquely yours. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Update soon?

Wah, this is getting interesting...I would really like to know what happens next. Is this going to be a Seph/Cloud pairing? Update!

Hmm, this is a very interesting beginning. I like how vivid and

intense the dream was and he must be pretty shocked to find himself

back in the past of all things.

Please keep writing.