|Reviews for Twisted Tails|
| Retto the Otter chapter 33 . 8h ago
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Damn it, did starsea get "up-ducted by aliens," this has been happening to alot authors on this site lately, they update stories on a regular basis, then, *poof* there all gone. Anywho, hope this story gets updated adventualy, and if starsea got a life or something, then whateves
| Grandpa simpson chapter 32 . 4/14/2013
Twisted tail, a thousand eyes, trapped FOREVER! EPA! EPA! EEEEPAAAAA!
| Sparkingdrago745 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
I really like your story! Great job! I am soon going to post a new fanfiction called ' the adventurer chronicles' please read it once it is up and get anyone else to read it if you can
| Rescue Wolf chapter 32 . 2/26/2013
Take your time i won't rush. And of course i would also like to say that this story is very interesting and very funny too.
| Kit chapter 32 . 11/17/2012
PLEASE UPDATE! I have been waiting for so long and the next chapter is still not, I'm begging you here, please! P.S. This tells you how much I like the story.
| Guest chapter 32 . 11/15/2012
That was a good read. So, um...Is this still an ongoing fanfic, or have you given up on it? If it's an ongoing fanfic, great, looking forward to the next chapter...If not...Well, that's a shame.
| Teraunce chapter 30 . 9/23/2011
well tis good that it tisn't dead, for if it were, so would you be. 12/10, faved and alerted.
| Something dictionary related chapter 26 . 8/8/2011
Where's chapter 26?
| 100-percent-Empoleon chapter 30 . 7/29/2011
this is exactly what you said in your other story
| Multiversity chapter 21 . 5/27/2011
You enjoy this, don't you?
| MammonDaughter chapter 29 . 3/29/2011
You should name this chapter Undone Memories or Memories in a bubble. Great chapter and I'm hoping for more soon.
| Shattered-k3 chapter 8 . 3/28/2011
Hello Starsea :) I really like this concept for a poke FF. The story evolves, as it were, pretty smoothly, and the characters are pretty fleshed out. The one thing that needs improvement would be the flow of your sentences. When I read it, it feels choppy, partly from the sentence arrangement:
"Then they started to run after Lizzy. Followed by Ash and Ryan."
You don't have to add "then" and you can just add an "and" to make it flow smoothly. You can even throw in an adverb to describe it better.
(They started to run after Lizzy, and were quickly followed by Ash and Ryan)
and partly from the verb tense:
"Brock, Ash, and Dawn started running as fast as they could. Now Vulpix could hear the voice loud and clear."
When Brock, Ash, and Dawn start to run, they are doing it in the past tense, like it happened earlier, and someone is telling you about it now. When Vulpix hears the voice loud and clear, adding "now" in that way makes it seem like its happening right now.
I mean nothing other than what is hopefully a helpful review. So P.M. me with any questions you may have. Keep up the great work :)
| 8TailFox chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
same here too:(
| Starsea chapter 28 . 3/28/2011
I'm not gonna be able to update in a while. I have a reason though. Whenever I try to post a chapter, fanfiction will say, "Error code". Then it says that I'm supposed to email them but I'm not able to. So, yeah. Like I said, it'll be a while.
I'll update as soon as fanfiction allows me to.