|Reviews for Tholie's Journey|
| Terry chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
| caiancaldasar chapter 5 . 6/4/2011
Oh this is good! Please continue writing Earth's Children fanfiction- there's too little out there. Don't worry about rewriting the story, that's what made the books a pleasure too read. Details help create depth. Depth makes life. Life makes a story worth reading.
| Folara chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
Thanks for the reviews! I know there's a lot more details I could be adding, but I feel I would just be rewriting the story from the book. They're gonna be quite similar, except for a few major changes since Ayla doesn't have her man "yet". ;) So you can fill in the other details yourself! It's like... story freedom.
| Araytigre chapter 5 . 4/5/2011
This is definately fun, similarity to the original series, but with enough difference that it is going to be a joy to read and Seeing Ayla's progress from a completely different perspective. Sorry I didn't review Ch.4, but I couldn't wait to read this one. More Please :)
| Araytigre chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
This sounds promesing. I like that Jetamio and the baby live, so Thanolan and Jondalar stay longer with the Sharamodi. I am interested to see where you are going from here, Will they meet up with Ayla? How will Baby handle the situation? Fun.
| Celebwen Telcontar chapter 3 . 10/1/2010