|Reviews for Heart of Gold|
| Dark1 chapter 7 . 7/12/2007
You write somewhere that Else Janssen has a Dutch accent but you wrote a line where she speaks German (Ach de lieber). And it doesn't make sense since Dutch people don't speak German. And I know since I come from Holland and I deffinetly don't speak German but Dutch.
| kiwi6226 chapter 7 . 1/9/2007
awwe I love this story! the ending is so real to life, that slight bit of awkwardness at the very end is genious and it reminds me of my life lol Great job!
| DarkAngel030 chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
GREAT STORY...JUST ONE THING...peoplefrom New Zealand are not called New Zealanders...there called Kiwi's...I was in NZ for 2 months i should know...ya anyway...GREAT STORY!
| Space-Case7029 chapter 7 . 5/6/2005
Good story. Enjoyed it.
| li'lmissnitpick chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
wow, creepy. i'm doing an ISU of ancient writing systems, sumerian cuneiform among them. who knew i'd be "working on my project" while reading fanfics?
| scbek chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Everything is good, very good, but I something I miss is the intro on every Relic Hunter serie. They always show what it all is about. You mention that very soon in the story (good), but as I said, I miss the intro.
keep up the good stuff.
| Swallow chapter 7 . 5/17/2002
Well written, interesting names though...
Have you ever played Baldurs gate? there's a guy called Jan Jansen too...
| darkgoddess003 chapter 1 . 4/5/2002
Great story! It was absulutely wonderful. Hope to read more of your stories
| Tabythah Raven chapter 7 . 3/23/2002
That was great ! I just finnished reading the whole story and I must say your very talented ! Thanks for sharing your awesome story !
| Snaggle chapter 1 . 3/22/2002
Please continue this in another story. There still are many unanswered questions.
| TPTerminator77 chapter 7 . 3/21/2002
what? this ain't no ending! hwat the hell you playing at? this story is the best i've ever read..pls pls pls continue
| Dramawriter chapter 7 . 3/19/2002
Great story! But there has to be a sequel, puh-lease? There was too much left unsaid and the story demands it. Thank you for the story, keep writing you have talent.
| VenturingDreamer chapter 7 . 3/19/2002
Resolution? You've got to be kidding me! There's tons of things left to be answered! ;) But I have faith there's gonna be a sequel, cause really, you're too good not to do one. lol
Anyway, please, keep writing. Loving every chapter, every story.
| Sylvy chapter 7 . 3/18/2002
Are you planning to give me a heart-attack? You can't just leave me here with such a cliffhanger, without promising to post a sequel IMMEDIATELY (lol)!
This story was truly great, and deserves to be continued: YOUR N.1 READER (me) IS WAITING, AND THE READER IS ALWAYS RIGHT, therefore: PLEASE COME BACK WITH A SEQUEL ASAP, OR I'LL START TO CRYYYYYYY ! (lol) ;)
| sci fi fan chapter 7 . 3/17/2002
I really liked what you got here. Please continue.