Great story.

coming back to see this again. this is amazing~

Very darkly humorous. But what happens next? I need to know! Does she slug him across the room? (Before kissing him senseless? XD)

Wow. And here I am thinking how awkward it would be to explain to his parents. (And Foaly loooooooooool.)

Any chance you'll add more to this?

I think that it is a well written story, just like all of you others, but at the end where Artemis asked Holly to marry him was much too sudden. Maybe, installed ad of him asking her to marry him, you should have had him ask her to go out on a date with her, and then kiss. Otherwise, it was great, little to no grammatical or punctuation errors, so all in all it was a great story.

This was cool. Really cool.

I liked it :)
-SQ

That was the best and most non-OOCest fanfic I've read in a while.

Then what happened?! I have to know! But seriously, I really loved your fic. The ending surprised me a little, but I'd live to see where this goes. What will Holly say? Or was Artemis only joking? Are you going to do a follow-up?

This is really awesomesause!

WOW... that was really unexpected :D I like it!

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...that was a joke right? ...

Good story, just...

Really? Marry me? Um... a totally 'Orion' thing to do. Not really 'Artemis'.

Wow…nice story! I really love the ending, although it did seem a little sudden. And I don't like how Artemis' feelings for Holly are just a manifestation of his guilt. That's sorta depressing to me.

"I dragged you through hell, and because I dragged you through hell, I now have to make you the queen of it."

OMG THAT'S SUCH AN AWESOME LINE!~

OOC at the end!The rest of the story was pretty good but the end was completely random.