Reviews for A Manifestation of Guilt
Bookworm2212 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I think this is a really sweet story... could you write more chapters instead of it being a one-shot? A sequel would work too! I'm gonna favorite this! ;)
Rosy-Fingered-Dawn chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Haha...I like this a lot. Although, I'm not so happy that Artemis' feelings for Holly are a manifestation of his guilt. *sigh*

But the kidnapping is, indeed, quite romantic :D

Rosy(me): Artemis, for goodness' sakes, would it kill you to act like a normal human just once? Maybe, I don't know, WHEN YOU'RE PROPOSING!

Artemis: ...

Rosy: Whatever.

-Rosy
The Codebreaker chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This is awesome! :D
west tigeress chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
im writing to you now not just to complement on this story (it was good but a little short) but i need to yel at you. ya keep starting really good stories but never finishing them! seriously! you have GOT to finish the one where hermione is related to voldemort! u stopt right when it got really good! u left us hanging. the shame createss. and from my favorite writer to
Indochine chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Lol for the end! But it was good, I liked it.
Haibara chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I very much enjoyed this! Artemis was so straightforward with his confession. I know that there have been moments of closeness in the series between them before, but I liked how Holly was physically comfortable around Artemis in this story. I always felt that she was that way with Butler after the first book (she was very free with the PDAs with him), so it's great to see that she treasures Artemis enough to not worry about being too close.

It was good to see him not beating around the bush. Nice that Mr. Calculating kept Holly off balance throughout the conversation, and finally wowed her by popping the big question.

Looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you so much!
aretiredfowl chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
(cracks up laughing) Oh, jeez. That was...That was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. In a good way, of course! haha. Good luck with the contest.

~HMF
Not-a-simpletoon chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
When I first read your author's note, I thought you were being a tad presumptuous. But then you turned out to be right ;)

Well, done! Loved the proposal (it's not as popular as I'd like in this fandom). This is the best I've read for the contest.
silverphoenix chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Well... That was confusing and unexpected. But I don't care because I loved it. :)
Kitsune Heart chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
...should I kiss your pinky to make it feel better?

Anyways, yay! New entry! I feel the proposal was a bit odd, but perhaps it's just fitting into the fact that Artemis is a bit off his rocker. Although I imagine Ru just squealed like a little piggy at that (no offense, Ru). And the image of Holly WANTING Artemis to be a sadistic little prat...nice. Way to give him encouragement.
Call me Mad chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Okay, that was the best I've read for the contest so far. Awesome job!
AJayde chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
What the... I'm confused. Majorly. What just happened? Not that that wasn't good but I just... Don't get it...

Abby Jade

ps only 12 more days until The Atlantis Complex comes out in the US!
Ann Incorporated chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
HA!

Well, I have to say this was very amusing! At first I was confused at why Holly was so distraught, but it's okay! I understand now! It was hilarious!

*AI :)
Lli chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
That was fabulous!
Name Here chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
And that, is how a perfect AF fanfic is done!

Thank You! :)
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