Reviews for A Manifestation of Guilt
Slim Shady chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
My favourite of all the entries. I espcially liked the end...

"'Marry Me'"

:D
TheCompletlyAddictedBookworm chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
which Greek myth is Arty-kun refering to? the one about Hades and Persephone is my guess. The story itself is better than most of the TBR stories I've read
Ru-Doragon chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
-claps hands over mouth and waits for laughter to subside before reviewing so as not to wake others- Nisha, this is BRILLANT! I love it! If I don't publish something I will DEFINATLY vote for this! -bursts into giggles again- She was on his lap and he was hugging her! -laughs then grins- Only thing missing is a kiss. Hey, promise me, when this contest is over, that you'll make another chapter for this okay? B/c really, it should continue. Like, really. It should. REALLY. -grins- This is great. You need to update stuff more. And take a fricking break from school! It's summer Love! -hugs and grins- _~
xybolic chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
OH MY GOD! QUEEN! MARRY! I cannot move on from that sentence! *squeals*

*rereads sentence*

'Marry me.'

*squeals*

*giggles*

IloveyouIloveyou

Moremoremoremoremore

(Sorry for my incoherent review, but this is what you do to me. :P)
HeadlessHoncho chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Omagosh! omagosh! omagosh! oma frikin' gosh! Do you think My gf would mind if i fell in love ith you a little bit? Cuz I'm eriously considering it after reading this. It was... Itwas just so... PERFECT. Inescapable perfection.
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