|Reviews for Convergence|
| Yurei chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read,seriously,honestly,from the bottom of my heart...and that ending? WOW...just...wow.
Btw,all your stories are beautiful. 3
| ShirouHokuto chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Oh gods, this is fabulously painful and beautiful and heartbreaking. ;o; Every detail is perfect. Amazing work.
| angelrock444 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
| Dragonist chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Why is that the best fics for these two always end up with (at least) bittersweet endings?
I was almost too depressed to review, but the amazingness of this fic made up for it. Yay for hopeless romances.
| Myrdschaem chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
This seems to have a melancholic air for me. It's a bit strange consindering the many war and battle scenes but works well. I liked how Hashirama was described with plant/earth attributes. The war scenes really conjure the atmosphere of traditional battle for me. Well done.
| max.tmy chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
this is a very beautiful piece.
i love it.
| Malcolmina chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
This is heartbrakingly in character and... I am at a loss of words.
The way you end the story with their different views of love and, well, convergence and division, made me simply blink open-mouthed for too long a time. You do this to me with every characterization of yours: I come to see it as utter awesome and the only formidable possibility. (This was particuarily powerful a reaction with ItaShi orz.)
You make their love beautiful in a heartachingly masochistic way.
To sum it up: ösadfhaskjfhsadfg ilu. Love and ranbows
| The Dragon Mage chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I... there is really nothing I can say to that.
This is perfect. There is absolutely nothing that could be different; every phrase, every word.
I started sobbing at "Her clear eyes are oddly sad. He wonders if she loved him." and I have not stopped.
Thank you. Thank you very much.
| Bankface chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Dear lord, it's all very well and good until I realize that you ended the story with gay sexandIdon'. :D
| xJasmine chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Oh my GOD. I really don't know what to say other than the fact that this fic is truly something very special.
The moment I saw the summary, read the first paragraph, I knew this fic was not only going on my favorites list, but in my bookmarks. As was said before, I love the idea of the 'firsts and lasts', with Madara experiencing the firsts and Hashirama the lasts, although I suppose it could've been both ways.
You've managed to create a very special tone in this fic, and the characters are just so different, it's amazing. Hashirama's death scene was my favorite part, especially when you cut off his thoughts. That just... Wow.
Besides that, I love how the relationship between them develops and the ending isn't sad- it feels as if it were meant to be. I don't know what to make of it. It's gorgeous.
Thanks for writing this, and I hope you write more in the future. I will be visiting and re-visiting this fanfic over time. :) I don't know why- reading this fanfic makes me want to dance.
Good luck in all your future endeavors,
| Akatsuki210 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
This is amazing! I like the format of it, with all the different firsts and lasts. The contrast in the last line of Madara and Hashirama's final sections really does a good, succinct job of showing how completely different their attitudes and outlook are.
| Medicinal Biscuit chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
The end was ballin. You absolutely get it. I always, ALWAYS loose interest in those epic chapter stories after the characters fall in love. I always think that should be the end. Your emphasis on Madara's sections only being the first, and Hashirama's only being the last times reflects how oppositely they see things, as is evidenced in the last lines of the last two sections. (I also found it kind of ironic how Madara, who is really final and harsh, was only paired with the firsts, and Hashirama, who you describe as being all optimistic and hopeful, only seeing the ends. It added another layer to the whole opposite thing, or at least I think so, and if you did it on purpose then BRAVO.)
Loved the concept, loved the execution, loved how you're ALREADY making a character for Uzumaki Mito even though she's only been in two chapters. That's so like you, haha.
And now, REQUEST TIME!
If you could write a Yondaime fic (you can do whatever you want, and if you don't want to that's fine, hence REQUEST) but I would love that. Anyways, really enjoyed this. Great job!
| paing chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
How could I review such piece of work?
Your skill in analogy writing ability is astonished me as usual. Such as their first meeting scene, and their last. Or something like, If you are fire I will be the water. If you follows the peace I will cause the chaos.
Their conclusion hailed my breath for a second. Their opposition is just so appropriated with the title. Poor shodai.
PS. I'm utterly curious that, if that was his first love, then there would be a second right? ;D
| knicknack chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
You make this world a little more awesome.